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Undiscovered Places
They like the trails
Veering off the map
to explore
the undiscovered terrain
they come across
a winding river
A connection formed
in the need to undress
and submerge themselves
in the depths of the option
Her tight tee
revealing the heft
springs from the clutches
of the confinement
Though deeply familiar
with the contours,
nothing quite compares
to the visual of such freedom
But when the pants come off,
he can do nothing but mirror
the compulsions to engage
in a shedding of the unnecessary
The lull of the river
and the scent of Pine
under the cloak of forest
Wading to the knee,
they collide in the currant,
guided by it's tranquil baptism
cupping the gift of it's force
and applying it,
respectively
the landscape of their flesh
calm and beaded
in the beauty
of a hideaway
they have no choice
but to be carried by
what is natural
Veering off the map
to explore
the undiscovered terrain
they come across
a winding river
A connection formed
in the need to undress
and submerge themselves
in the depths of the option
Her tight tee
revealing the heft
springs from the clutches
of the confinement
Though deeply familiar
with the contours,
nothing quite compares
to the visual of such freedom
But when the pants come off,
he can do nothing but mirror
the compulsions to engage
in a shedding of the unnecessary
The lull of the river
and the scent of Pine
under the cloak of forest
Wading to the knee,
they collide in the currant,
guided by it's tranquil baptism
cupping the gift of it's force
and applying it,
respectively
the landscape of their flesh
calm and beaded
in the beauty
of a hideaway
they have no choice
but to be carried by
what is natural
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Re. Undiscovered Places
12th Oct 2019 2:11am
I admire a man who knows passion and lust is just not confined to the bedroom it goes far beyond the scope of what the mind feels, and its a beautiful element of surprise when the heart acts upon its true sense of judgment. I am still waiting for my magical moment to make love to a handsome man in a hot air balloon... I'm not getting any takers...it makes me truly wonder what is the word cumming too, oh, a very nice spill my tender poet
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Re: Re. Undiscovered Places
12th Oct 2019 3:35am
Oh darling, thank you for such a thoughtful reading of this little nature walk. Yes, the sensuality of life should never be exclusive to a bedroom. I must say I will never think of a hot air balloon in quite the same way. What an exciting idea. I gather you must not fear heights. That would certainly overshadow the cliched airplane romp in the bathroom. It is a genius idea.
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12th Oct 2019 5:29am
Mm...your bed, then make it happen, pleasure while floating among the blue majestic sky, the peaks of pleasure, weightless, boundless, rapture as you inhale the beautiful and wonderous gifts of Mother Nature’s calling... throwing your head back, self-gratification, felt, inching you closer to the throne of undulated desire, your head cradled by the infinity of air, space, time, losing yourself, uncontrollable shudders, fingers, mouth reaping the pursuit of its pearly spillage, the moment when man and time collide, as the uncorked flow of ecstasy slides into the gist of its oral suctioning magnifications, echoes of your animalistic roars resonating over the mountain tops, at that moment, you are one with self, the King of our hot air balloon time capsule, drifting toward the sunset as the soft stirring of earth below, lay at our feet
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12th Oct 2019 1:37pm
A ride to remember. Honoured that you have conjured such a delicious, dizzying fantasy to remember.
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13th Oct 2019 3:08am
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Re: Re. Undiscovered Places
12th Oct 2019 1:40pm
When such opportunities present themselves, one must always take action. So nice to see you back, you have been missed.
Re. Undiscovered Places
12th Oct 2019 7:02am
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12th Oct 2019 1:41pm
Re. Undiscovered Places
A walk in the wild can take a couple to more than one kind of undiscovered place. Enjoyed the sensuousness of the poem and its picture (which is perhaps many a woman's bathtime daydream), a slip back into the early days of Adam and his Eve. Favourite verse for its description of getting naked:
But when the pants come off,
he can do nothing but mirror
the compulsions to engage
in a shedding of the unnecessary
But when the pants come off,
he can do nothing but mirror
the compulsions to engage
in a shedding of the unnecessary
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Re: Re. Undiscovered Places
12th Oct 2019 1:43pm
Isn't it fun to relive the past Adam and Eve style. Always a wise read King Solomon.
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13th Oct 2019 7:41am
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12th Oct 2019 1:46pm
That wit is sharp, today. Once delighted, the setting would be hard to dismiss, unless one was a victim of faulty memory. But one can always pretend and play again.
Re: Re. Undiscovered Places
12th Oct 2019 8:00pm
Yes - Let's just pretend
To play that game again: once
The hunger is spread...
I feel verses coming on
To play that game again: once
The hunger is spread...
I feel verses coming on
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13th Oct 2019 1:23am
Re. Undiscovered Places
13th Oct 2019 2:46am
"What is natural" definitely the best line. Most truthful thing in life it self
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13th Oct 2019 4:37am
Re. Undiscovered Places
14th Oct 2019 2:33am
Mmm..nothing like love unfolding within the beauty held in nature. It sets such a sensual tone. I truly love this one most...
" Wading to the knee,
they collide in the currant,
guided by it's tranquil baptism
cupping the gift of it's force
and applying it,
respectively "
...nature infused sex that is equivalent to a religous experience...mmmm...my favorites. Yummy write. Keep scoring home runs, T.;)
" Wading to the knee,
they collide in the currant,
guided by it's tranquil baptism
cupping the gift of it's force
and applying it,
respectively "
...nature infused sex that is equivalent to a religous experience...mmmm...my favorites. Yummy write. Keep scoring home runs, T.;)
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14th Oct 2019 4:17am
I wondered if that tranquil baptism line would be too much. You just validated any doubt I was having about that. Glad I made the right choice.
I hope the writing gods and goddesses continue to lead me on this winning streak. And you are correct, the fusion of nature and sex can be our of this world
I hope the writing gods and goddesses continue to lead me on this winning streak. And you are correct, the fusion of nature and sex can be our of this world