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Intimacy
It's not always found
between the sheets;
it may not even be with
whom you'd expect
A tiny crack in the interior,
and a little glimpse
appears
And you are recognized
You could be on a work break;
fading into sleep
But you have that awareness
that you are cared for
And it is soothing
And you like who you are
just a little more.
between the sheets;
it may not even be with
whom you'd expect
A tiny crack in the interior,
and a little glimpse
appears
And you are recognized
You could be on a work break;
fading into sleep
But you have that awareness
that you are cared for
And it is soothing
And you like who you are
just a little more.
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Re. Intimacy
9th Oct 2019 4:16am
A very enlightening and truthful ink stain on so many intellectual levels, handsome poet... the depth of your mind never seems to amaze me
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Re. Intimacy
10th Oct 2019 4:12am
Yep
Having someone look at you and actually see you is a touching, personal thing
And it does make me feel a little better
Having someone look at you and actually see you is a touching, personal thing
And it does make me feel a little better
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Re: Re. Intimacy
10th Oct 2019 4:26am
Key point. Actually see you. Glad you got the vibe on this and thanks for commenting.
Re. Intimacy
14th Oct 2019 2:39am
YES! You know I feel this one strongly, T... or should, given all my open spills regarding the highs & lows. Damn it, those highs are one helluva a gift that makes life a little sweeter. So much so, you provoked tears, but thank the heavens, I CAN atleast cry now! On the list immediately!
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Re: Re. Intimacy
14th Oct 2019 4:26am
Hopefully, it was a good cathartic cry. Yes, sometimes the smallest recognition can bring that swooping high, or just remind us in the moment, that we matter. An honour to be added to the RL list.
Re: Re. Intimacy
14th Oct 2019 5:38am
Indeed. I'm blessed to know it here @ home, but coming from a far away place by way of a soul connection holds a certain kind of special in my heart...or did.
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14th Oct 2019 6:21pm