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Haiku #31 ...time
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Haiku #31 ...time
day breaks sunny surf
gently sighs sands sing softly
swaying palms...still time
Written by
Ely
(E.A.Rothwell)
Published
6th Oct 2019
| Edited
13th Oct 2019
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Cafe Critique 1(Haiku)
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Written for Cafe Critique Comp 1
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#beach
#haiku
#sea
#sun
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Re. Haiku #31 ...time
Silver_Birch
6th Oct 2019 7:36pm
Poetically expressed, and good use of alliteration.
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Re: Re. Haiku #31 ...time
Ely
(E.A.Rothwell)
6th Oct 2019 7:51pm
Thank you , Silver... I am a fervent fan of the pleasures of alliteration...thank you for the positive feedback...much appreciated... Ely
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Re. Haiku #31 ...time
SweetOblivion
6th Oct 2019 11:45pm
soothing verses - feeling their warmth
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Re: Re. Haiku #31 ...time
Ely
(E.A.Rothwell)
- Edited 8th Oct 2019 4:58am
8th Oct 2019 4:33am
A pleasing mist to sooth a fevered brow...Ely
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