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Relinquish in the scars
He smiles
A heart of nothingness
It leaves me feeling cold
TONIGHT
Stars shine
But I can't see them with my own
Ey-ey-eyes
And if it's not everything you left behind,
then its still the essence of a different life that haunts me
(chorus)
Do you, do you?
still find comfort in the looking glass
Looking in your own reflection
Do you, do you? Still
make yourself eligable
By claiming she's yours
Your hers, thats all you are
Each relinquishing in scars...
He throws
A yarn of tethered strings
It leaves me wondering why?
SIT TIGHT
I'll try decipher it, but not without
Wait wheres...
nevermind
If you can't be bothered really trying then why sit here and agonise with(or without) me?
(chorus x1 with extension)
Shoulda left them to rest in peace
Who is she... but me
but easier to control
A rebel, but just add alcohol
She does everything you want...
I left you I regret this
But the guy I'm with deserves me
Don't come crying
next time she cuts you
next time she swears she doesn't love you...
(chorus)
GOODNIGHT
A heart of nothingness
It leaves me feeling cold
TONIGHT
Stars shine
But I can't see them with my own
Ey-ey-eyes
And if it's not everything you left behind,
then its still the essence of a different life that haunts me
(chorus)
Do you, do you?
still find comfort in the looking glass
Looking in your own reflection
Do you, do you? Still
make yourself eligable
By claiming she's yours
Your hers, thats all you are
Each relinquishing in scars...
He throws
A yarn of tethered strings
It leaves me wondering why?
SIT TIGHT
I'll try decipher it, but not without
Wait wheres...
nevermind
If you can't be bothered really trying then why sit here and agonise with(or without) me?
(chorus x1 with extension)
Shoulda left them to rest in peace
Who is she... but me
but easier to control
A rebel, but just add alcohol
She does everything you want...
I left you I regret this
But the guy I'm with deserves me
Don't come crying
next time she cuts you
next time she swears she doesn't love you...
(chorus)
GOODNIGHT
Published 22nd Dec 2011
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23rd Dec 2011 10:33pm
25th Dec 2011 5:31am
26th Dec 2011 10:04pm
Thank you, I really do actually quite love this piece, it was for a long time just sitting as that first verse. It had such impecaple melody I decided I had to finish it :D I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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30th Jan 2012 2:10am
fo sho! super fab stuff in here! I believe that you probli play the guitar...? I canfeel it behind the words in a way that only the guitar can scream! really nice
30th Jan 2012 5:56am
Yes I do a bit, I'm slowly getting better at it. But yes I'm glad you enjoyed this piece, I'm actually getting rid of this account to create a new one based completely on my song lyrics and shying away from the poetry. I feel this is my niche and I should let it take me where I need to go. The name is LyricistER. See you around :)
