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ONLY FOR A FEW
ONLY FOR A FEW
Few quaff the rhythm of a spring
serene and pure and reflects rays
which are sent by the sun to clear
the mind once water trills its way.
Just when smooth rhythm plays its tune,
it lifts the mood to mountain air
that spurs the heart to ride a waft
and reach a space no sound can trace.
Melodious rhythm rules the heart
that gets enchanted by its charm.
A beat from it intoxicates
the gloomy soul to soar so high.
BY JOSEPH ZENIEH
All rights reserved
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Few quaff the rhythm of a spring
serene and pure and reflects rays
which are sent by the sun to clear
the mind once water trills its way.
Just when smooth rhythm plays its tune,
it lifts the mood to mountain air
that spurs the heart to ride a waft
and reach a space no sound can trace.
Melodious rhythm rules the heart
that gets enchanted by its charm.
A beat from it intoxicates
the gloomy soul to soar so high.
BY JOSEPH ZENIEH
All rights reserved
____________________________________
Published 4th Oct 2019
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Let me see if I have this straight.
Very few (people?) drink heartily of a spring that is calm and clean and that reflects the light that the sun sends to clear a particular mind of some unknown thing once the spring’s water sings a series of quickly repeated high notes as it trickles somewhere?
If so, what is your purpose in making this claim?
Very few (people?) drink heartily of a spring that is calm and clean and that reflects the light that the sun sends to clear a particular mind of some unknown thing once the spring’s water sings a series of quickly repeated high notes as it trickles somewhere?
If so, what is your purpose in making this claim?
5th Oct 2019 8:05pm
Dear Baldwin,
Very few people from your country drink from such a spring, but from my country, they do, and in particular l do. By the way, which country are you from? Do you agree about the effect of rhythm as l mention it?
Very few people from your country drink from such a spring, but from my country, they do, and in particular l do. By the way, which country are you from? Do you agree about the effect of rhythm as l mention it?
5th Oct 2019 9:12pm
If there are lots of people from your country who "quaff", why are you saying that there are very few who do?. And it seems to me that you are not saying people drink from a spring. You say they drink from a spring's **rhythm**. But if the spring is serene -- does it have a rhythm? More importantly, you haven't answered my question regarding what the purpose of your claim is.
5th Oct 2019 10:18pm
And you haven't answered mine. It seems to me you like to talk quite a lot. Perhaps, talking is your favourite hobby.
5th Oct 2019 10:30pm
I asked first. And speaking of likes, it appears that dodging questions (and posing irrelevant ones) is something you like to do a lot. You've just done it again.
