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Honeymooners
You made me come outside with you
to get the newspaper.
For your sake
when you suggested a section
I played
interested as well as I could.
The first snowfall
was the night before and
it moistened dark blue
to the denim on our asses
as we sat on the curb.
Not one time did you inch closer.
to get the newspaper.
For your sake
when you suggested a section
I played
interested as well as I could.
The first snowfall
was the night before and
it moistened dark blue
to the denim on our asses
as we sat on the curb.
Not one time did you inch closer.
Published 22nd Dec 2011
| Edited 23rd Dec 2011
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22nd Dec 2011 2:19pm
23rd Dec 2011 3:23am
24th Dec 2011 11:25am
When i first read:
"it moistened dark blue
to the denim on our asses "
i thought i wanted to correct it;
but now I don't. As for the entire poem:
i love the various feelings i get when i
read it; some sweet, some quite disturbing.
(like)
"it moistened dark blue
to the denim on our asses "
i thought i wanted to correct it;
but now I don't. As for the entire poem:
i love the various feelings i get when i
read it; some sweet, some quite disturbing.
(like)
