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Re. Never Skirting
4th Oct 2019 2:30am
The skirt is a beautiful accessory to open and close such a delicious thought.
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5th Oct 2019 9:36am
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Re. Never Skirting
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Re. Never Skirting
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5th Oct 2019 12:04pm
Re. Never Skirting
5th Oct 2019 2:41am
Nothing is skirted here and nothing denied for his pleasure to abide within your folds. There is ecstasy for both belle and beau in this encounter. And the beauty of hunger lends itself to your verse.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
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Re. Never Skirting
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7th Oct 2019 5:04am
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Re: Re. Never Skirting
Disagree with you on stanza breaks on sonnets - continuity allows enjambements at the end of the stanza w/o interrupting the flow of reading - and does not leave the envoi lonely and isolated at the end. Much traditional sonnet verse is presented in this way. Glad you enjoyed the verses - I hope the end rhymes did not seem too forced - Smiles.
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7th Oct 2019 12:16pm
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Re: Re. Never Skirting
7th Oct 2019 12:33pm
It is always nice to discuss verses and poetry and metre - it is one of the things that I most cherish here - learning from others.
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7th Oct 2019 12:35pm
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Re: Re. Never Skirting
7th Oct 2019 12:38pm
I am always learning - and trying to diversify and be different - and avoid silly mistakes like splitting infinitives as someone noticed in one poem today. It is so easy to get stale and learning and listening is for me one way to avoid this.