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Do as I say and nobody gets hurt

Everybody get down on the floor
hands above your heads.
I wont tell you again
you're grammar is shite.

Don't you fucking move
or I'll cut out a stanza.

You! get down
and shut the fuck up.
I cant understand a word your writing.

You two old bastards
are a right pair of fucking rhymes,
don't make me capitalise your lines.

Now listen up,
everyone empty your pockets,
I want all your poetry
every scrap, note pad
and idea.

Come on shorty that means you as well,
what the fuck is this three line shit?
dig fucking deeper.
Razzerleaf
Author's Note
I was queuing in the local bank and my mind started to wonder
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