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i am your canvas
as i lay on the divan
lost in a captivating book
you quietly come and sit
on the floor next to me.
i look at you and wink
and flash you a smile
before i turn back to my book
i seem to have immersed myself in.
you lightly trace your fingers across my hip
and down my thigh.
you’ve caught my attention
because i know what happens next.
i continue to “read” my book
as you get up and walk to the opposite side of me
slowly lifting my legs
to place over the top of your lap
as you sit down with me
and start tracing the balls of my feet.
“another part of your body to appreciate.”
you say as you look deep into my eyes
and slowly trace the bottom of my heels.
heels
then arches
sliding up to my toes
and in between my toes.
caressing
squeezing
scratching
cupping
lingering...
at some point i’ve put down my book
i hadn’t even noticed.
all i can do
is watch you.
you are an artist
and i am your canvas.
lost in a captivating book
you quietly come and sit
on the floor next to me.
i look at you and wink
and flash you a smile
before i turn back to my book
i seem to have immersed myself in.
you lightly trace your fingers across my hip
and down my thigh.
you’ve caught my attention
because i know what happens next.
i continue to “read” my book
as you get up and walk to the opposite side of me
slowly lifting my legs
to place over the top of your lap
as you sit down with me
and start tracing the balls of my feet.
“another part of your body to appreciate.”
you say as you look deep into my eyes
and slowly trace the bottom of my heels.
heels
then arches
sliding up to my toes
and in between my toes.
caressing
squeezing
scratching
cupping
lingering...
at some point i’ve put down my book
i hadn’t even noticed.
all i can do
is watch you.
you are an artist
and i am your canvas.
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Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
30th Sep 2019 3:05am
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30th Sep 2019 4:39am
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Anonymous
- Edited 12th Oct 2019 8:45am
30th Sep 2019 5:02am
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30th Sep 2019 6:41am
thank you so much lovely! i appreciate your feedback. i think i was trying to add where i believe the breaks in the sentence should be but i do think it takes away from the flow of the poetry. thank you for pointing that out! and thank you for stopping by dearest!
🖤penelope
🖤penelope
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Anonymous
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30th Sep 2019 8:01am
i love this mical! almost sounds like you’re describing me ;) very beautiful, thank you for sharing.
🖤penelope
🖤penelope
Anonymous
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30th Sep 2019 9:11am
you are so sweet! thank you. you made me smile, that is so kind. you have a great night as well!
🖤p
🖤p
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Anonymous
30th Sep 2019 11:42am
Suspense! I love suspense in pleasure. It builds up the imagination. Well done my dear.
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Re: Re. i am your canvas
30th Sep 2019 4:42pm
thank you lovely! i’m glad you enjoyed :) thank you for your kind words.
🖤penelope
🖤penelope
Re. i am your canvas
30th Sep 2019 5:25pm
I can only imagine the artwork that was about to be created. A very sensual piece
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Re. i am your canvas
30th Sep 2019 7:39pm
i hope i was able to help you imagine that artwork in full detail ;)
thanks for stopping by and reading, it means a lot!
🖤penelope
thanks for stopping by and reading, it means a lot!
🖤penelope
Re. i am your canvas
30th Sep 2019 8:52pm
Reflexological piece. I did hear years ago there is a part of the foot that when touched can affect the sex drive.
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Re: Re. i am your canvas
30th Sep 2019 9:15pm
for some more than others ;) i never understood the fascination with feet until a special someone showed me why.
rub your special someone’s feet, see where it gets you ;)
🖤penelope
rub your special someone’s feet, see where it gets you ;)
🖤penelope
Re: Re. i am your canvas
1st Oct 2019 6:44am
Replying rhymingly to your tip:
Something I might try
but she might be shy -
we've only just met,
will not go there yet!
Something I might try
but she might be shy -
we've only just met,
will not go there yet!
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1st Oct 2019 2:24pm
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1st Oct 2019 10:54pm
Just remembered after I sent this, that among her accomplishments she is a trained reflexologist although not working as such (she is a carer, works with residential care clients and mental health, and also studying for church ministry). Think the shoe could be on the other foot so to speak!
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4th Oct 2019 11:09am
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4th Oct 2019 4:56pm
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4th Oct 2019 10:12pm
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5th Oct 2019 1:04pm
Re. i am your canvas
17th Mar 2020 1:02am
There are so many levels to your work. You manage to be exotic yet pure...unsure yet certain. You feel and explore whatever it is that you are feeling to the max.
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