the sound of one hand clapping

Bravo!  Many create their own drama then complain about the discord.  

In the spirit of honest critique:

man is soaked to
[it's] rimy bones w/

Did you mean his? You refer to man, then say its.  Love the use of rimy!  It's a word not often used and refreshing.  Lastly, I hate the w/ because you're cutting out some nice assonance of i by abbreviating it. I would recommend spelling it out and relocating it to L3.

man is soaked to
his rimy bones
with deceit, jealousy
and rage

is/his/with/deceit - great assonance going on there not just with the i but o as e as well. Goodly done.

Sorry for delayed response, but i was at the pumpkin festival having all kinds of fun. It was a rare joyful day of emptying out the world and reconnect to myself.
i appreciate the caring eye you bring to DUP. For myself  ( to explain my creative processes)  i have never read a book or took a class in poetry. My process is organic and raw. I dont really dwell much on what i write. For me it's a simple as, "have a thought, put it down," ( it took no longer than two-three minutes to compose the above). The spontaneity of the moment is what i relish the most about writting. Perfect or imperfect, the emotional element is all encompassing for me. That being said , i still appreciate the views of others and how they develop their art.

luv's
buddhakitty.

Apologies. When someone requests honest critique I feel I am honoring them by contributing my time and expertise, particularly when there's something that interrupts the flow such as an inconsistency, typo, grammatical error, etc.  

I understand your process and what you are saying, I do that a lot, particularly with my short visuals; however, in asking for honesty, members who take that request seriously are devoting their time to provide that honesty. It sounds like you're not really aren't interested in that honesty despite appreciating it?  

Perhaps you should request friendly feedback, then I would know just to comment on alternate aspects aside from critique.  

xo

As i said.  I was simply clarifying my creative processes. Honest feedback is asked for and reviewed and will be continued to be asked for and i will continue to be open about my processes. I think its important to communicate fully as i never want to leave anyone in the dark . I hope that you understand that i respect, nay, honor your presence in my primitive attempts at creating, but we will  not always see things the same.

with the greatest of respect,
buddhakitty.

So true.  Nothing tastes like the thought of wanting it then we cry at realities malformation of what we thought we wanted. Lol hope that makes sense