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a strange and lonely place to be
the old waitress,
working in an all
night diner, pouring
coffee at 2 a.m. for
the drunks, the lost
and the forgotten
knows
the hospital room
with tiny windows
and a bed filled by
the alienation of
suffering knows
the ghostless streets
glistening in the after-
wash of a cold November's
night rain knows
the stripper who has
been raped by the eyes
of strangers in the naked
asylum of her body knows
the dark corners of
small, dirty room filled
with bottles, pills and
tears of grief as heavy
as gold knows
the dead who lie snugly
in their unexistential
non-angst dont care if
they know-
but at one time they
knew
the walls know
our secerts know
our hearts know
our pain knows
the silence knows...
that this
is a
strange
and
lonely
place
to
be
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Re. a strange and lonely place to be
27th Sep 2019 9:33am
Dear BK,
This digs deeply into the cavernous depths of being. Where the real truth lies.
I enjoyed the format of this piece. Each stanza was a story all by itself. I could hear the narrator tell their tale. Marvelous write! H🌷
This digs deeply into the cavernous depths of being. Where the real truth lies.
I enjoyed the format of this piece. Each stanza was a story all by itself. I could hear the narrator tell their tale. Marvelous write! H🌷
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Re: Re. a strange and lonely place to be
27th Sep 2019 9:46am
Thank you luv. I was attempting to communicate the utter loneliness and existential seperation that is present in this world.
100 hugs,
buddhakitty.
100 hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re: Re. a strange and lonely place to be
27th Sep 2019 9:50am
Re. a strange and lonely place to be
27th Sep 2019 10:53am
Re: Re. a strange and lonely place to be
27th Sep 2019 11:11am
Re. a strange and lonely place to be
27th Sep 2019 1:16pm
It can be very heavy at times, being here. You're one of the best, Kitts. xo
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Re: Re. a strange and lonely place to be
27th Sep 2019 1:35pm
Re. a strange and lonely place to be
Apologies regarding my first comment - I didn't know what to say, so I started by saying that I'm moved to add your piece to my Reading List. And so I did. :)
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Re: Re. a strange and lonely place to be
28th Sep 2019 00:54am
No apologies needed. Thank you for moving me to your reading list.
pax,
buddhakitty.
pax,
buddhakitty.
Re. a strange and lonely place to be
27th Sep 2019 4:21pm
Best thing I've read ll day .
the saddness and truth in this
makes one look at others with different eyes.
the saddness and truth in this
makes one look at others with different eyes.
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Re: Re. a strange and lonely place to be
28th Sep 2019 1:00am
Thank you nikkimoe. Lets hope we can all learn to look at others in a different light.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. a strange and lonely place to be
27th Sep 2019 6:49pm
Brings back many memories... they crowd into my head...you have done this so well, Kitty... no more need be said... Thank you for a truly great spill of ink...hugs... Ely
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Re: Re. a strange and lonely place to be
28th Sep 2019 1:03am
Re. a strange and lonely place to be
27th Sep 2019 8:58pm
As the hoe scrapes the earth this poem scrapes the hidden into the light. Really nice write.
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Re: Re. a strange and lonely place to be
28th Sep 2019 1:07am
Re: Re. a strange and lonely place to be
28th Sep 2019 1:27am
can't think of a better description for this piece, so won't try
bk - you took me there
bk - you took me there
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Re: Re. a strange and lonely place to be
28th Sep 2019 1:40am
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Re: Re. a strange and lonely place to be
28th Sep 2019 4:49am
We are nothing more than the ripples from a stone thrown in the water.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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