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Illusions of mind...
She’s such a sweet vision
As in a spell, I’m bound
Wrought with a fire’s indecision
Lost, as if missin’ n’ eyes found
Caught, in her whole essence
Beauty of her is all around
A smile so bright, I can sight
Heaven’s light-rays shinin’ now
Fought not, for futility’s the mission
Alas, I can’t stop this fallin’ down
She’s such a picture, in a frame
“A masterpiece” I declare her mane...
Author's Note
Yea, basically dreaming again lol
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Re. Illusions of mind...
Anonymous
25th Sep 2019 2:52pm
I don't know where your inspiration came from for this one, but I love that you didn't pin it down solidly. For me, the image that came immediately to mind was the Moon. Leaving it open to interpretation was brilliant :-)
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Re: Re. Illusions of mind...
25th Sep 2019 7:57pm
You def. get me lady, n yea guess that’s why
my dreams always leave me grasping for meaning! lol... thanks so much lady :)
my dreams always leave me grasping for meaning! lol... thanks so much lady :)
Re. Illusions of mind...
25th Sep 2019 3:00pm
you know i love it all, papi
but...
"Alas, I can’t stop this fallin’ down"
... wooooow and damn. yea i feel that line right there like i fell on my arse
xo
but...
"Alas, I can’t stop this fallin’ down"
... wooooow and damn. yea i feel that line right there like i fell on my arse
xo
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Re: Re. Illusions of mind...
25th Sep 2019 7:58pm
Well I can tell you just seeing you here made me very giddy! Big thanks my beauty :)
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25th Sep 2019 3:12pm
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26th Sep 2019 1:50am
I’m happy to hear you’re happy my dearest, n truly deeply appreciate you much! :)
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25th Sep 2019 5:42pm
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25th Sep 2019 9:21pm
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26th Sep 2019 1:51am
Re. Illusions of mind...
26th Sep 2019 00:49am
What a beautiful dream for such a magnified illusion of the mind, and very well stated
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Re: Re. Illusions of mind...
28th Oct 2019 8:22am
Wow, sorry I’m very late replying :( but I’m deeply grateful for the read n thoughts sweetie!
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28th Oct 2019 3:12am
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28th Oct 2019 8:23am
Damnit how’d you guess!? lol... truly, truly thankful for the RL add n comment sweet babydoll! 😊