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Failings in love
When he failed you the first and the second
you were forgiving
When he failed you the third and the fourth
you were in love
When he failed you the next and again
you were unconditional
you were forgiving
When he failed you the third and the fourth
you were in love
When he failed you the next and again
you were unconditional
Published 25th Sep 2019
| Edited 7th May 2020
Author's Note
Love is many things and it makes many things of us as well.....
(Inspired by Rupi Kaur style and genius)
https://bookriot.com/2018/01/23/rupi-kaur-quotes/
(Inspired by Rupi Kaur style and genius)
https://bookriot.com/2018/01/23/rupi-kaur-quotes/
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30th Sep 2019 3:49am
Wow - if love can traverse from the 1st to the last
indeed,
it has become forgiving & unconditional...............eternal
indeed,
it has become forgiving & unconditional...............eternal
30th Sep 2019 2:58pm
Very good entry, DP. I could sense the essence of Kaur solidly, yet through your own voice of originality.
Well done and best of luck in the comp!
Well done and best of luck in the comp!
1st Oct 2019 00:55am
I fell behind in commenting and this slipped through the crack! Run a spellcheck quick before the deadline tomorrow! Good luck in the challenge!
