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Still pissed
How do you help one out run demons. When they seem to live deep inside them. You offer prayers you offer a hand and talk as much as you like. Yet when you think youve helped. Are they ok out of sight.
Ive gone over many things in my head. Was there something i could have noticed in what you said. Something to help you get over dred. Damn it could you not have thought of your kids. Im heartbroken and pissed. You were brave but yet a coward. I want to sing the praise of the brave man I knew. Yet i want to beat the shit out of you.
I dont know what was in your mind. I guess i shouldnt judge. Yet to think of all youve hurt its hard not to hold a grudge.
Ive gone over many things in my head. Was there something i could have noticed in what you said. Something to help you get over dred. Damn it could you not have thought of your kids. Im heartbroken and pissed. You were brave but yet a coward. I want to sing the praise of the brave man I knew. Yet i want to beat the shit out of you.
I dont know what was in your mind. I guess i shouldnt judge. Yet to think of all youve hurt its hard not to hold a grudge.
Published 25th Sep 2019
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25th Sep 2019 3:30am
The "what if's" that cross our paths in life at times causes unrest, just be sure to let that go as well and not let it fester. I liked the ended line and the rhyme was felt. Aloha, Dark
26th Sep 2019 00:09am
This prose captures your internal pain and frustration powerfully Jimi.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
26th Sep 2019 3:12am
20th Mar 2020 1:20am
Damn. I feel this poem, like deep in my soul. I understand it so much. Great writing.
22nd Mar 2020 00:38am
