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Less
As I close my eyes
And forgive the lies
Relax my shoulders and unwind
I finally realize I’m through with it
No more sleepless nights
No internal fights
No more drowning the pain
No feeling ashamed
The noose around my neck has been cut loose
Fall has finally come
Green leaves are done
And forgive the lies
Relax my shoulders and unwind
I finally realize I’m through with it
No more sleepless nights
No internal fights
No more drowning the pain
No feeling ashamed
The noose around my neck has been cut loose
Fall has finally come
Green leaves are done
Published 25th Sep 2019
Author's Note
When you realize it doesn’t even hurt anymore
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25th Sep 2019 2:44am
Less is more in this poem.. loosing all the pain while understanding its name. Good job.... thumbs up :)
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27th Sep 2019 8:13pm
pain hurts/
letting go of pain/
hurts even more/
and when its finally gone,
we run, run away from love
irony!
letting go of pain/
hurts even more/
and when its finally gone,
we run, run away from love
irony!
My god well said !
I’m running away frm anything that resembles love at this point
I’m running away frm anything that resembles love at this point
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Apr 2020 5:45pm
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