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If I Ever Get Home
Hard to remain positive
when the world collapses around you
Kicked to your knees
face in the dirt
Crawling each second along
tooth and nail, clawing
Tomorrow you might die
today, that glimpse of sun blinds
If I ever get home before dark
my daughter will you remember me?
Published 24th Sep 2019
Author's Note
Sorry it has to be this way Kiddo
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this is deep and meaningful and full of love for your daughter its nice to see this type of enter action between a father and his daughter...for you are the first one that she sees as a real man that truly loves from the deepness of your heart and soul..she will always remember you cause you were there in her life and world...A FATHER AND A DADDY'S LOVE
24th Sep 2019 2:57pm
This just breaks my heart, Carpe. Every child has a right to know their father - he is the first male influence in their lives. Uncertain of your situation, and I am certainly not implying anything, but I hope it's not a case where the child is being used as a pawn. That is such a tragic situation.
Hoping things get better for you - and your daughter will remember you.
Hoping things get better for you - and your daughter will remember you.
24th Sep 2019 5:11pm
24th Sep 2019 11:03pm
A similar journey from years back reminds me some situations require an incredibly long and patient breath from parents.
25th Sep 2019 8:16am
26th Sep 2019 00:43am
Damn , I felt that ,mate I have no words as this is fucking out of order (situation not poem)
