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Limerick Ode To TODSKI

 
There once was a poet called Todski
whose mind was as quick as a jet-ski
opinions on crack
would take nothing back
no prisoners taken, no mercy

It's funny the people you miss
like Todski taking the piss
he was always upfront
and up for the hunt
my opinions usually dismissed

Todski to me was a prick
I'm sure he thought me a dick
personalities clashed
we mutually bashed
and got on each other's wick

Honest and straight to the point
his anger did not disappoint
would stick to his gun
and never would run
not even while smoking a joint

Todski was right in your face
at least he was not a disgrace
others hide in their lies
it's the truth they despise
like cowards their easily chased
Written by David_Macleod (14397816)
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Author's Note
I have a sneaking admiration for a member who has left the site (Todski). We clashed swords many times, even some times it got messy. However he was at least honest in his opinion, forthright and antagonising. But I would rather have that than cowards hiding under a veil of lies and bullshit.
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