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That Sheet
Author's Note
A line I saw made me want more - please don't purloin these verses,
For, if you do, I will surely send you my hatred and all of my curses...
For, if you do, I will surely send you my hatred and all of my curses...
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Re. That Sheet
21st Sep 2019 4:04pm
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21st Sep 2019 4:08pm
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21st Sep 2019 4:12pm
Re. That Sheet
21st Sep 2019 4:08pm
Brilliant opening line. Sets the stage perfectly to satisfy the call of the closing.
This particular line may be one of the hottest you've composed: " You're cock of guilt of any form - for I fit like a glove".
Given the week I've had, it seemed to cure a particular lament ;)
This particular line may be one of the hottest you've composed: " You're cock of guilt of any form - for I fit like a glove".
Given the week I've had, it seemed to cure a particular lament ;)
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22nd Sep 2019 8:54am
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22nd Sep 2019 12:21pm
Never considered that a recipe for a happy marriage. I've been enlightened.
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22nd Sep 2019 1:12pm
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22nd Sep 2019 2:33pm
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Re. That Sheet
21st Sep 2019 5:16pm
The heat is on! You set me up for the delights within. And I must say I am delighted. ;-)
XOXO
John
XOXO
John
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22nd Sep 2019 8:54am
Re. That Sheet
21st Sep 2019 7:52pm
limericious verse...it's fun using my poetic license to comment on your licentious rhyme...
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22nd Sep 2019 8:57am
Re. That Sheet
21st Sep 2019 10:08pm
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22nd Sep 2019 9:00am
Fresh sheets do go with
fresh passion and fresh methods
of finding delight
fresh passion and fresh methods
of finding delight
Re. That Sheet
21st Sep 2019 10:46pm
THIS WOULD KNOCK A MAN TO HIS KNEES BEGGING FOR ALL THE SWEETNESS LIKE A TREATS...THIS IS BEAUTIFUL WRITTEN LOVED THE FLOW OF SENSUAL SEDUCTION HOW IT PLAYS WITHIN THE MIND..
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22nd Sep 2019 8:59am
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22nd Sep 2019 11:01am
HUMMM...BLESS HIM ANOTHER WONDERFUL POSITION TO ENJOY THE PLEASURES OF GIVING AND RECIEVING...
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Re: Re. That Sheet
22nd Sep 2019 11:35am
I take pleasure in giving, of course,
And receiving his girth at the source
Of lust deep inside,
As I'm opened wide
And he comes in my cunt with such force
And receiving his girth at the source
Of lust deep inside,
As I'm opened wide
And he comes in my cunt with such force
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22nd Sep 2019 11:39am