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stranger
I want to crawl into you tonight
inside you where it's safe
safety in the arms of a stranger
just for a night
taste your sin
let you taste mine
fill my emptiness--
with cum soaked promises
we're both broken
it won't mean nothing
just sweet little things whispered in the dark
where I can be anyone you want me to be
you...the man I'm lusting
my secret desires bidden
bound by you...deviant lusts realized
and taken out on my flesh
fuck me with anger
I promise to return your hatred
drunk off of you I won't think of him
hiding all my truths behind your masculinity
held tightly to your lies I'll scream your name
surrendering who I am to your fantasies of her
both of us are broken in love
I want you to crawl into me tonight
bury yourself in me
I'll help you forget
fuck the sadness gone
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Re: Re. stranger
20th Sep 2019 9:19am
Re. stranger
20th Sep 2019 10:01am
That is one perfect scenario, very well put. Nothing like a great fuck to forget everything. You have a great way to express a visual.
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Re. stranger
20th Sep 2019 10:41am
Wow... Now that was deep sometimes we reach out to a stranger for there's no commitment just a moment to forget the hurt and pain and suffering from the heartaches nicely done...
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Re. stranger
20th Sep 2019 11:06am
It is definitely one way to experience that "out of body" need. An intriguing capture of immediacy and wild abandon.
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Re. stranger
20th Sep 2019 11:40am
Hot desire miss crimmy, dysphoria funneled into the groins of pleasure 🔥
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Re. stranger
20th Sep 2019 12:46pm
gods, this is me these past few weeks, lustful and sad, at a crossroads in my sexuality... this is all the fierceness I've lost...
is it odd that I'm crying reading it?
yes, probably but lawd does it echo in me
is it odd that I'm crying reading it?
yes, probably but lawd does it echo in me
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Re: Re. stranger
20th Sep 2019 1:49pm
no it's not odd at all beautiful one when I went to add themes to this lust and sadness came to my mind alone...you've lost nothing beautiful one it's only the empty eating at us for the moment... thank you for your deep understanding and love on this write...
love you lady...
Brenda ❤💖❤
love you lady...
Brenda ❤💖❤
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Re. stranger
20th Sep 2019 10:34pm
If only we could fuck the sadness gone lovely Crim.
“drunk off of you I won't think of him
hiding all my truths behind your masculinity
held tightly to your lies I'll scream your name
surrendering who I am to your fantasies of her..”
This stanza was pure fire girlfriend.
I felt every line.
And so we keep on pretending..
Your friend,
Losty
“drunk off of you I won't think of him
hiding all my truths behind your masculinity
held tightly to your lies I'll scream your name
surrendering who I am to your fantasies of her..”
This stanza was pure fire girlfriend.
I felt every line.
And so we keep on pretending..
Your friend,
Losty
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Re. stranger
20th Sep 2019 11:07pm
The anger aspect is particularly intriguing. but I love the whole write. Fine work, Brenda!
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Re. stranger
21st Sep 2019 1:54pm
(I'll help you forget
fuck the sadness gone)
The words of a powerful healer
Love in its many forms
fuck the sadness gone)
The words of a powerful healer
Love in its many forms
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Re. stranger
22nd Sep 2019 5:39am
Re. stranger
23rd Sep 2019 6:56pm
Well, sometimes it's just like that and we need a certain feeling to help forget what was with someone else and the pain they left behind.... I'm feeling the rawness of this piece....
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
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