God and the Sodomites

Brutal Work David this bites like a fork-tongued snake=Excellence!!!

thank you for that comment, sometimes the brutal truth can affect people - that is my hope :-)))))))))))))))))))

Dear D,

Phenomenal write. I’m heartbroken for the pain and theft inflicted by the machinations of those who wield trust and power over us.
A zillion hugs in solidarity! H 🌷

thank you so much. It was a very difficult poem to write, I wrote it after my PTSD was clicking off the scale, I think thats why it was so brutal

It's such a raw write, you can't help but be impacted by it. Terrific courage to work through such things. <3

I re-experience those times every day (Graphically) PTSD is a mind tormentor

thank you for your comment always good to get :-))))))))))))))))

david, i have a really strong stomach for disturbing subject matter but fucking hell, mate this one is rough and it's raw and in your face. It doesn't back down for shit. tbh, felt a little queasy midway thru {& that's a compliment to how impactful you've been}
🖤 and hugs to you

Sorry Shadoe - it is probably the rawest and brutal poems I have written, Sometimes the brutality makes people think but I wrote it in full rage mode - just felt I had to write it.

I will take it down for you if it goes too far

#scottishbearhugs  :-)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

oh dear god no lol my sensibilities are not that delicate so don't you dare take it down or I will find you and tickle you.
it is real and it's brutal because life is that way... some things don't deserve sugar coating.

you should be immensely proud of this piece ov writing... not the experience but that transliteration of memory to words... this took a hefty set of balls
#ninjakittyhugs

If you wanted me to take it down I would have

I am glad you don't - chasing and tickling hmmmm might just take it down (LMFAO)

thank you for your words :-))))))))))

You’re still one of the bravest people I know, Bear. I can tell it took a lot to write this down from what I know of this event. And that’s all I’m going to say regarding this. It’s your story on the page, fearlessly scribed.

“I survived because the fire within me burned brighter than the fire around me”

-M

thank you so much, my friend. Some poems have to be written raw and uncompromising, a brutal poem exposing brutality.

sadly:
"I survived by creating fear, fear of the knife and fear of their consequences"

your da best :-))))))))))))))))))))