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wildflower
I lick the honey from your lips
and
taste the wildflowers that bloom inside your chest
and
taste the wildflowers that bloom inside your chest
Published 19th Sep 2019
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20th Sep 2019 11:31am
7th Jan 2020 8:11pm
Sometimes the most sublime reflections emanate with the pure simplicity of the universe itself. This has a quiet calm moving over that sense of energetic connection I found sublime. Economic use of metaphor is winsome. Subtle syllabic harmony in the close of the two lines with and sitting in the abdomen, linking them. Nice work.
8th Jan 2020 5:03am
Beautiful and sensuous poetry, backbone... Just wonderful.
If you get a chance, check out my poem, Sipping On Her Soul. I think you might like it ❤️
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/336406-sipping-on-her-soul/
If you get a chance, check out my poem, Sipping On Her Soul. I think you might like it ❤️
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/336406-sipping-on-her-soul/
15th Jan 2024 6:24pm
