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[2019] When Feeling Derailroaded
What seems a step forward
may actually be a step backward
and
what seems a step backward
may actually be a step forward
Standing on the platform
no one is man-handling your body
ushering you to board the train
demanding that you
Step lively!
Published 18th Sep 2019
| Edited 12th Dec 2019
Author's Note
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20th Sep 2019 00:06am
this is one of those shallow puddle poems that you step into and find yourself right up to your middle in!
cool message, maggers - NO-one's forcing you to step on board the choo-choo
cool message, maggers - NO-one's forcing you to step on board the choo-choo
Thank you, Butters. I'm sorry about the puddle. It's a chronic antifreeze leak.
26th Sep 2019 00:24am
Nice existential ink M...as Sartre said...even choosing not to choose is a choice...one cannot escape one's freedom.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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