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nacre
Published 18th Sep 2019
Author's Note
for Admin's September #Reading comp:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/10961/#454484
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/10961/#454484
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18th Sep 2019 5:39pm
Holy smoking barrels!
"9mm meaning
of strung words"
I hope to grow up and write like you someday!
❤📝
"9mm meaning
of strung words"
I hope to grow up and write like you someday!
❤📝
18th Sep 2019 5:49pm
18th Sep 2019 5:53pm
yeah, nothing to crit here for me
really like the lines j quoted - no casting those pearls willy-nilly but firing them point-blank. such pretty bullets.
but i'm also much taken with 'denizens of possibility'... has my mind expanding
really like the lines j quoted - no casting those pearls willy-nilly but firing them point-blank. such pretty bullets.
but i'm also much taken with 'denizens of possibility'... has my mind expanding
interesting Noun, nacre is
due to its organic / inorganic nature
Always reminded me of a mollusk's version of Flem (Yeah, my Marine Biology Prof and her students were all grossed out at how i see the world and all her (Gaia) denizens within and upon -- Laughs manically)
Super creative spill
wonderful lines, here!
due to its organic / inorganic nature
Always reminded me of a mollusk's version of Flem (Yeah, my Marine Biology Prof and her students were all grossed out at how i see the world and all her (Gaia) denizens within and upon -- Laughs manically)
Super creative spill
wonderful lines, here!
18th Sep 2019 8:57pm
After making the connection of 'nacre' with pearls, I love this even more. I enjoy multi-level writing/meanings.
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18th Sep 2019 10:19pm
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18th Sep 2019 11:23pm
19th Sep 2019 3:23am
How did you...? Wow, just wow. That last stanza had me smiling and shaking my head (yeah!)
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
19th Sep 2019 4:11am
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19th Sep 2019 5:04am
Dear A,
⚪️⚪️⚪️⚪️⚪️⚪️⚪️ These are supposed to be pearls to replicate the notion of how wonderful I think this piece is and how right you are. We take these shapes called letters, twist them to create words and from there all these fantastic stories! Beautfully done as usual!
H🌷
⚪️⚪️⚪️⚪️⚪️⚪️⚪️ These are supposed to be pearls to replicate the notion of how wonderful I think this piece is and how right you are. We take these shapes called letters, twist them to create words and from there all these fantastic stories! Beautfully done as usual!
H🌷
20th Sep 2019 7:56am
the ancient n alien....explorative nature unbound...aw so perfectly pithily captured in ur carved out words..n, i #read them as i feel fly freefall..in all the spatial flights, braved in unknown zones... beautifully captured dear A. loved the title much.. best in the comp. x
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