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No Reason Just Death
This feeling of
Death
Wanting to
Die
For no good
Reason
It's just how I feel
Does there have to be
A cause?
It's how I feel
Anger
Despair
Hating myself
Worn out
For no reason at all
Just done
With everything
It's not that my life
Is bad
I just feel
Like I'd be better off
Dead
But no one
Believes me
Because I don't
Have a reason
To want to die
I have no heart wrenching story
That made me think this way
It's just how I am
And that's not good enough
Death
Wanting to
Die
For no good
Reason
It's just how I feel
Does there have to be
A cause?
It's how I feel
Anger
Despair
Hating myself
Worn out
For no reason at all
Just done
With everything
It's not that my life
Is bad
I just feel
Like I'd be better off
Dead
But no one
Believes me
Because I don't
Have a reason
To want to die
I have no heart wrenching story
That made me think this way
It's just how I am
And that's not good enough
Published 18th Sep 2019
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18th Sep 2019 2:49am
This shouts our so much to my current state of mind, feel I’m in limbo walking on a thin line between life and death
18th Sep 2019 2:51am
Those of us who go on in life knowing there is no one who wins, knowing there is no one who beats the grand scheme drawn out before our very creation, are the true attestations to the flow of the universe.. for we do not continue in the hope that in the end we will win, or be wiser, we go on simply because we do not know how to stop. That is all.
18th Sep 2019 7:57am
Dear M,
I know this feeling. You have penned this painfully accurately.
The forthrightness of your meaning is so raw and matter of fact I’m quite taken aback especially as it defines most of my days. Deeply felt, but please don’t take action other than to continue writing. You have a wonderful way of communicating with out the maze of metaphors.
H🌷
I know this feeling. You have penned this painfully accurately.
The forthrightness of your meaning is so raw and matter of fact I’m quite taken aback especially as it defines most of my days. Deeply felt, but please don’t take action other than to continue writing. You have a wonderful way of communicating with out the maze of metaphors.
H🌷
18th Sep 2019 10:40am
YOU PENNED THIS TO A T... FOR WE ALL AT ONE TIME OR ANOTHER HAVE FELT THESE INNER FEELINGS BURNING AT OUR SOUL RIPPING INTO THE VERY FABRIC OF OUR BEING, BUT IT IS NOT JUST DEATH THAT CALLS OUR NAME IT IS LIFE THAT GIVES US THE STRENGTH TO CONTINUE ON WITH LIVING FOR WE EACH SUFFER DIFFERENTLY THROUGH THIS CYCLE OF LIFE, FOR SOME WISH TO LIVE WHILE OTHERS WISH TO DIE BUT IT IS THE STRONG ONES THAT BECOME THE CHOSEN FEW TO OPEN UP AND SPEAK FROM TRUTH OF THE MIND HEART AND SOUL LETTING THOSE AROUND US KNOW ITS NOT OVER TILL YOU SAY GOOD BYE...AMAS SHAMEL
18th Sep 2019 4:13pm
