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We need
not (to)
…have …
amorous atoms
after
molecules mingling
mindlessly
moving
aroused auras
fingering
physically in
coition
and trade
tracing
Our
existences
together
eternally
…to have…
* * *
we
can love
one
another
even if
Both
are not in the
same place
same space
Published 17th Sep 2019
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17th Sep 2019 1:08pm
17th Sep 2019 1:11pm
Anonymous
17th Sep 2019 1:56pm
Love is not confined by space or time. It simply is...limitless. Beautiful message here, Tallen
17th Sep 2019 3:37pm
eternal love
will never be confined to a man-made construct
such as time
appreciate the kind praise
will never be confined to a man-made construct
such as time
appreciate the kind praise
Anonymous
- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
17th Sep 2019 5:59pm
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17th Sep 2019 6:02pm
i believe we writers are liken to a scientist
with respect to exploration in the relationship
between spirit and love
appreciate Your read and wonderful share
with respect to exploration in the relationship
between spirit and love
appreciate Your read and wonderful share
17th Sep 2019 7:16pm
Good stuff T! This is a little different that what I'm used to from you brother. It is really quite good ya know it?
17th Sep 2019 8:15pm
17th Sep 2019 8:38pm
17th Sep 2019 8:50pm
those amorous atoms will get you every time if you don't watch out! enjoyed the read, mingling the molecules of presence in a world of text
17th Sep 2019 8:57pm
LOL -- even Your comments cause me to grin
thank You
and thank You for the read and share
thank You
and thank You for the read and share
Tallen❣🧜🏿♀️
Jeez my dear man, I'm feeling how she's feeling, wow am deeply speechless here ..in a confessional sense of being,
if I may say..
Kudos to this mysterious beautiful woman,
absolutely gorgeous you are when rapturous , gods breathtaking
Jeez my dear man, I'm feeling how she's feeling, wow am deeply speechless here ..in a confessional sense of being,
if I may say..
Kudos to this mysterious beautiful woman,
absolutely gorgeous you are when rapturous , gods breathtaking
18th Sep 2019 7:22am
I prefer to be in this state of romance
and being in a shy sort of lovin'
is nice
i mean, really nice -- You know, not over the top
thank You for the wonderful share with me
Honored for the RL add
(i am smiling that You feel this......Mmmm)
and being in a shy sort of lovin'
is nice
i mean, really nice -- You know, not over the top
thank You for the wonderful share with me
Honored for the RL add
(i am smiling that You feel this......Mmmm)
18th Sep 2019 8:30am
Dear T,
Lovely! I adore the notion of love like this. To me it hurts so much less and offers so much more by way of distance. How beautifully you’ve captured this. Here’s wishing you sublime long distance love. H🌷
Lovely! I adore the notion of love like this. To me it hurts so much less and offers so much more by way of distance. How beautifully you’ve captured this. Here’s wishing you sublime long distance love. H🌷
18th Sep 2019 4:26pm
Sometimes Long Distant Love
feels safer in a shy sort of way
don'tcha think?
It's an easy subject to write about because there's no messy actual physical to confuse and muddy things up
and there only remains the air of bliss, want, sapiosexual intimacy and the spiritual --
Wonderful You found this adorable
thank You for kind praise and share
feels safer in a shy sort of way
don'tcha think?
It's an easy subject to write about because there's no messy actual physical to confuse and muddy things up
and there only remains the air of bliss, want, sapiosexual intimacy and the spiritual --
Wonderful You found this adorable
thank You for kind praise and share
18th Sep 2019 9:52am
18th Sep 2019 4:28pm
Love is the most powerful because it's
the glue of our eternal interconnectedness
throughout all universes and everything
in them
: )
the glue of our eternal interconnectedness
throughout all universes and everything
in them
: )
18th Sep 2019 3:38pm
Love holds no bounds.
Eloquently stated, darling T! (;
This was a gem to read.
Yours,
Losty
Eloquently stated, darling T! (;
This was a gem to read.
Yours,
Losty
18th Sep 2019 4:31pm
It's always a delight to know
You have enjoyed another spill of mine
Beautiful
thank You for the read and share
and kind praise
Honored for the RL add
You have enjoyed another spill of mine
Beautiful
thank You for the read and share
and kind praise
Honored for the RL add
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
18th Sep 2019 10:24pm
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18th Sep 2019 10:30pm
the subject of sapiosexual will ever be an everlasting
study into LDR's be they artisans or not
appreciate the read and kind share
study into LDR's be they artisans or not
appreciate the read and kind share
19th Sep 2019 00:20am
19th Sep 2019 00:37am
I have never (even to this day) seen me as a poet
but thank You, nevertheless
appreciative
but thank You, nevertheless
appreciative
19th Sep 2019 2:39am
My most impactful experienced have happened while hidden behind technology . It's a beautiful feeling indeed. Keep enjoying the love, may you both stay blessed.♥️
19th Sep 2019 3:03am
We have and will continue
as long as our veil of anonymity persists
You caused me to smile -- thank You
thank You for the read and kind praise,
Beautiful
as long as our veil of anonymity persists
You caused me to smile -- thank You
thank You for the read and kind praise,
Beautiful
19th Sep 2019 11:55am
what are borders but imagin'd schisms...
... how could such insignificance curb emotion & connection
such a gorgeous write, brother
how I've miss'd the gentle, esoteric touch ov your pen
x
... how could such insignificance curb emotion & connection
such a gorgeous write, brother
how I've miss'd the gentle, esoteric touch ov your pen
x
19th Sep 2019 2:27pm
