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I am...
I am...
laughter in the air
a child at the beach
a girl at the bar
a boy with a cigarette
a man with his dreams
a woman with her desires
I am...
existing in this world
a reflection in the mirror
a shadow on the wall
a midnight gasp of horror
a little girl's doll
a bereaved wife's sorrow
a husband's last regret
I am mere words
without which I am
nothing
but a huddled figure in a padded room
catching imagined swirling letters
circling my head.
laughter in the air
a child at the beach
a girl at the bar
a boy with a cigarette
a man with his dreams
a woman with her desires
I am...
existing in this world
a reflection in the mirror
a shadow on the wall
a midnight gasp of horror
a little girl's doll
a bereaved wife's sorrow
a husband's last regret
I am mere words
without which I am
nothing
but a huddled figure in a padded room
catching imagined swirling letters
circling my head.
Published 19th Dec 2011
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19th Dec 2011 11:55pm
19th Dec 2011 11:57pm
The imagery within these words were vivid and each scenario mentioned flowed into my mind. Very well written and a delightful read.
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20th Dec 2011 2:52am
Thanks Darkangel! You are so kind for dropping by and reading and commenting...wow!
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23rd Dec 2011 2:43am
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23rd Dec 2011 2:49am
I am honoured. Just remember my name! !Fame! heheheh...remember that song..? anyways...thank you!
23rd Dec 2011 7:07am
23rd Dec 2011 10:54am
From your lips to the gods ears! Yes...when that happens. Thank you for reading and kindly commenting!!
4th Feb 2018 9:48am
it feels like it's my story. keep on inspiring..................................
4th Feb 2018 9:56am
22nd Feb 2018 2:24am
this poem of yours, always makes me feel what can one be, always inspiring. Precious script.
6th Apr 2018 1:21am
I just read this in Luna Child's Competition...
I had already noticed you since I arrived just a week , ( or less ) ago ;
Very well done , Grace...I felt you , and loved your phrasing...
You have obviously been around the wheel a few times...( if not more )
I heard / saw / felt your words , and absolutely loved especially this :
a midnight gasp of horror
a little girl's doll
a bereaved wife's sorrow
a husband's last regret
I laughed with acknowledgement and understanding ;
Thank you for bringing it to my attention through the competition...
Have you published yet / by now ?
You truly deserve it !
Best...Blackwolf
I had already noticed you since I arrived just a week , ( or less ) ago ;
Very well done , Grace...I felt you , and loved your phrasing...
You have obviously been around the wheel a few times...( if not more )
I heard / saw / felt your words , and absolutely loved especially this :
a midnight gasp of horror
a little girl's doll
a bereaved wife's sorrow
a husband's last regret
I laughed with acknowledgement and understanding ;
Thank you for bringing it to my attention through the competition...
Have you published yet / by now ?
You truly deserve it !
Best...Blackwolf
8th Apr 2018 2:38pm
Thank you for reading and commenting Blackwolf. I co-authored a book with another person once. Its in Amazon. Other than that, no. Not published. Yes, indeed, I am all those through words that are sewn together to create an identity. a midnight gasp of horror, a little girl's doll, a bereaved wife's sorrow, a husband's last regret... through woven words these can be expressed...right? Thank you for dropping by.
15th Aug 2023 2:46pm
I very much like.especially the bit about the padded room. I think sometimes our mind is a padded room. Regards. And good luck in the comp.
15th Aug 2023 3:34pm
