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His Command
My naked body lays across your bed.
So many thoughts going thru my head.
I want to feel your gentle touch.
I want to experience that amazing rush.
You take my hands,
Secure them tight.
Now on to my legs,
with a hard,
tender bite.
My body is shivering.
My mind is racing.
Here I lay,
I'm yours for the taking.
I do as you please,
Cuz thats what good girls do.
On my knees,
I only bow to you.
You drag the whip across my skin.
The biting down wears my lip thin.
You firmly pop my legs with force.
But I like the pain,
please do it more.
I want to be the only one who fully understands.
I want to be the only one under your command.
So many thoughts going thru my head.
I want to feel your gentle touch.
I want to experience that amazing rush.
You take my hands,
Secure them tight.
Now on to my legs,
with a hard,
tender bite.
My body is shivering.
My mind is racing.
Here I lay,
I'm yours for the taking.
I do as you please,
Cuz thats what good girls do.
On my knees,
I only bow to you.
You drag the whip across my skin.
The biting down wears my lip thin.
You firmly pop my legs with force.
But I like the pain,
please do it more.
I want to be the only one who fully understands.
I want to be the only one under your command.
Published 15th Sep 2019
Author's Note
He took me to so many levels of pleasure. I had to learn to trust. We had no safe word, he just knew. I miss him.
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15th Sep 2019 1:47am
15th Sep 2019 5:16am
Thank you. Any constructive criticism to give? I'm a newbie. I just dabble in arts and poetry to stay clean. It's my outlet. From him and drugs. Both were my addiction to overcome.
15th Sep 2019 2:13pm
I haven't got any criticism of this because it is so well written in my view.
Reminds me of a scene in 50 shades perhaps. I'm being nosey here but did you ever dominate your lover?
Reminds me of a scene in 50 shades perhaps. I'm being nosey here but did you ever dominate your lover?
16th Sep 2019 5:46am
15th Sep 2019 2:22pm
Very amazing poem
Cute by the way
You got my Latin attention
Your one and only Trome
Cute by the way
You got my Latin attention
Your one and only Trome
15th Sep 2019 10:33pm
I really like this, the pace of the short lines adds to the breathlessness of the content.
16th Sep 2019 6:09am
