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His Command

My naked body lays across your bed.
So many thoughts going thru my head.
I want to feel your gentle touch.
I want to experience that amazing rush.
You take my hands,
Secure them tight.
Now on to my legs,
with a hard,
tender bite.
My body is shivering.
My mind is racing.
Here I lay,
I'm yours for the taking.
I do as you please,
Cuz thats what good girls do.
On my knees,
I only bow to you.
You drag the whip across my skin.
The biting down wears my lip thin.
You firmly pop my legs with force.
But I like the pain,
please do it more.
I want to be the only one who fully understands.
I want to be the only one under your command.
HisGoodgirl2017
Written by HisGoodgirl2017 (Amanda michelle)
Published
Author's Note
He took me to so many levels of pleasure. I had to learn to trust. We had no safe word, he just knew. I miss him.
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