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Astro-Figuring-Shit-Out
i wonder how the moon feels
as it’s surface kisses the sky
does it feel as though stars blanket it
or like it has been left alone to die
i wonder if the stars know their worth
all the while lighting up our evenings
they’re of a countless number and dying
though still, such illustrious beings
then the sun finally rises
lighting up a new day
it’s more than I could ask for
i just came here to say
i want to illuminate your nights
and twinkle all around you
i want to rise and light up your world
and i promise i’ll always choose you
i may come in lunar phases
or even shoot across the horizon
i might warm your weary soul
or calm you when you’re frightened
i want to instill the kind of peace
that you find in the dark at the lake
hearing crickets and the water ripple
and accept that we all make mistakes
come with me and take a seat
take a look at all of the constellations
drink it in, and just relax
let go of all that frustration
because the moon is full
all of the stars are finally out
before the sun can rise on us
let’s ponder what life is about
as it’s surface kisses the sky
does it feel as though stars blanket it
or like it has been left alone to die
i wonder if the stars know their worth
all the while lighting up our evenings
they’re of a countless number and dying
though still, such illustrious beings
then the sun finally rises
lighting up a new day
it’s more than I could ask for
i just came here to say
i want to illuminate your nights
and twinkle all around you
i want to rise and light up your world
and i promise i’ll always choose you
i may come in lunar phases
or even shoot across the horizon
i might warm your weary soul
or calm you when you’re frightened
i want to instill the kind of peace
that you find in the dark at the lake
hearing crickets and the water ripple
and accept that we all make mistakes
come with me and take a seat
take a look at all of the constellations
drink it in, and just relax
let go of all that frustration
because the moon is full
all of the stars are finally out
before the sun can rise on us
let’s ponder what life is about
Author's Note
Just needed to get words out.
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14th Sep 2019 11:14am
Mis liv i stand in your ovation. A beatiful way to envoke nuturing, love and constellation
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Anonymous
14th Sep 2019 3:04pm
Easy keeper for me! :-)
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Willow! You're such a dear! Thank you for honoring me with an RL entry, and thank you for the read and the comment! ♥️
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Wonderful Feel to this cool wanderlust to the Moon spill
When Selene is at her Fullest in wonder and Glory
many a Lover and or Romantic find Beautiful metaphors
to share with others.........their Love
Yours here are exquisitely Gorgeous
When Selene is at her Fullest in wonder and Glory
many a Lover and or Romantic find Beautiful metaphors
to share with others.........their Love
Yours here are exquisitely Gorgeous
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15th Sep 2019 3:43am
Aw, Tallen! Thank you for this lovely comment! You all make me smile and remember what I loved about DU to begin with.
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15th Sep 2019 3:57am
I hope you can figure it all out before sunrise with that special someone who can be all the things you want.
Doesn't sound like you're asking too much either. I love the feel of the poem, how the words revolve & dance around the promise of a brand new day. :-)
Doesn't sound like you're asking too much either. I love the feel of the poem, how the words revolve & dance around the promise of a brand new day. :-)
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17th Sep 2019 9:05pm
Awe, thank you, Snaggy. I appreciate these kind words, thank you for stopping in to read and leave a comment!
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17th Sep 2019 9:07pm
Thank you, dearest Alan, I appreciate the kind comment! Thanks for stopping in to read and comment!
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17th Sep 2019 4:09pm
This reminded me of something I long ago wrote. Perhaps its an inspiration shared but yours is so well done. Think Ill post mine as well then well both have a great read, thanks again!
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Anonymous
29th Sep 2019 12:04pm
Liv! Very creative and well thought out!
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17th Dec 2019 7:35am
A wonderful piece. Very nicely done. I love the imagery..!! I really appreciate it. well i love to write as well so please check my site poemtheart thank you :) hope you like it..
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