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Is this me ?
I sit I stare and look at his face
Is the time is this the place
The walls seem to close in
I contemplate.....................
My mind feels confused why do I wait?
Is the time is this the place
The walls seem to close in
I contemplate.....................
My mind feels confused why do I wait?
Published 13th Sep 2019
Author's Note
This is my first attempt to ever write a poem. For fun.
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Anonymous
13th Sep 2019 9:29am
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13th Sep 2019 10:44am
Good first effort don’t be afraid to put your feelings down see where it leads you
13th Sep 2019 6:37pm
When you write poetry, you reach deep within your soul and mind, your subconscious comes up with questions that will shake your foundations. Keep writing.
Welcome to DUP.
Welcome to DUP.
13th Sep 2019 11:19pm
14th Sep 2019 7:53pm
14th Sep 2019 10:06pm
This piece speaks volumes. For your first try at writing a poem you did very well. All it is is reaching deep within and allowing your heart to speak what your mouth may have a hard time speaking. As you continue to write is the better you will find your words flow. Trick is to just let it flow. Writing can help you sort things out while releasing what you may often hold inside. Keep that pen moving. Welcome to DUP...
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
14th Sep 2019 10:50pm
Great 1st effort
had me wishing for MORE!
Maybe spill a
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had me wishing for MORE!
Maybe spill a
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