deepundergroundpoetry.com
☆
~☆~
Visual poem....
Visual poem....
Published 13th Sep 2019
| Edited 6th Jul 2020
Author's Note
Copyright © 2019 PandoraUnleashed. All rights reserved.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 22
reading list entries 7
comments 41
reads 1317
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
13th Sep 2019 1:53am
17th Sep 2019 9:15pm
This is truly in the lyrically poetic spirit. You took celestial imagery but made it erotic. A perfect mating of heavenly images into physically potent metaphors. XoXo John
16th Sep 2019 6:53pm
Thank you for such a beautiful comment & the compliment of an add, John!;)
13th Sep 2019 2:10am
Anonymous
13th Sep 2019 2:11am
Girl...I'm tellin' ya...
16th Sep 2019 11:27pm
Anonymous
13th Sep 2019 2:22am
Damn...Yeah, just like that!!!
16th Sep 2019 11:27pm
13th Sep 2019 2:23am
OOOOOOOO Sensual chills fill me to the tip top! 🙄🙃🙄
"Prop me on the ledge of heaven" What a nice awesome, romantic , sensual passage that evokes so many beautiful, sensual , spiritual, and delicious images. 😇😉
"Prop me on the ledge of heaven" What a nice awesome, romantic , sensual passage that evokes so many beautiful, sensual , spiritual, and delicious images. 😇😉
16th Sep 2019 6:55pm
13th Sep 2019 2:30am
13th Sep 2019 2:43am
13th Sep 2019 4:00am
16th Sep 2019 6:56pm
13th Sep 2019 4:26am
17th Sep 2019 9:16pm
13th Sep 2019 5:55am
16th Sep 2019 6:52pm
13th Sep 2019 6:36am
Short and beautiful. I echo Goldenmyst's comments. 'Prop me on the ledge of Heaven' conjures up mental romantic picture of a man placing his woman on a wall in front of himself.
17th Sep 2019 9:16pm
13th Sep 2019 9:52am
Beautiful writing Pandy! Short, but perfectly formed and oozing with sensuality. Love it!!
17th Sep 2019 9:15pm
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 6:45am
13th Sep 2019 11:40am
<< post removed >>
17th Sep 2019 9:17pm
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
13th Sep 2019 2:24pm
<< post removed >>
16th Sep 2019 11:28pm
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
14th Sep 2019 5:15pm
<< post removed >>
16th Sep 2019 7:00pm
Thank you for such a wonderful comment, HF! I'm glad it made ya think;)
14th Sep 2019 11:08pm
I love how you went that extra mile to capture the romance of this piece.... The picture is great and so are the words.... I do love the selection you made.... Very beautiful write...
16th Sep 2019 6:58pm
15th Sep 2019 8:06am
16th Sep 2019 11:29pm
It's so good to see your presence, but I'm rarely here either! Hugs...
17th Sep 2019 12:24pm
16th Sep 2019 6:04am
17th Sep 2019 9:18pm
16th Sep 2019 6:59pm
aw beautiful Pandora this is gorgeous
I'm so sorry I missed it...well I'm happy I saw it today...
divinely lovely...
love you lady...
love Brenda❤
I'm so sorry I missed it...well I'm happy I saw it today...
divinely lovely...
love you lady...
love Brenda❤
Yay! I'm glad you did & no worries, we can't catch everything thrown out there!;) Love ya bunches!❤
Oh.... thank you graciously for the add too
Oh.... thank you graciously for the add too
16th Sep 2019 7:02pm
Yay! I'm glad you did & no worries, we can't catch everything thrown out there!;) Love ya bunches!❤
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
17th Sep 2019 8:45pm
<< post removed >>
17th Sep 2019 9:13pm
