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No Words
Life that started
Out happy
Where happiness
Played a big
Part in me
Until it became
Really sad
Life that you
Can't handle
Can't find the words to describe
All the pain I hold inside
I'm suffocating
I'm drowning
I cant breathe
I need to release
These emotions
Their killing me
Out happy
Where happiness
Played a big
Part in me
Until it became
Really sad
Life that you
Can't handle
Can't find the words to describe
All the pain I hold inside
I'm suffocating
I'm drowning
I cant breathe
I need to release
These emotions
Their killing me
Published 12th Sep 2019
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12th Sep 2019 00:59am
12th Sep 2019 9:09am
In the simplicity of this piece I think you did well.... I can feel the frustrations and the build up by not being able to freely let it all flow, let it all go. Nice write. Keep pushing that pen...
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
12th Sep 2019 9:46pm
In that last stanza, it's they're like cries for help that fall on deaf ears.
Hope everything gets better for you.
Welcome to DUP.
Hope everything gets better for you.
Welcome to DUP.
