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Awaiting Miracles
Your advice to wait
Has left me in water
Drowning softly
Going no farther
Glossy views beneath
Calling to the father
Passing in an undertow
Complaining of stains
Left from the blood pouring
Out of twin eyes
Listless in their mourning
Lost days of fearless youth
Love is left distraught
In uncertain, timid interactions
Belligerent words have fought
Each new sermon served
And the lack of a lesson taught.
Has left me in water
Drowning softly
Going no farther
Glossy views beneath
Calling to the father
Passing in an undertow
Complaining of stains
Left from the blood pouring
Out of twin eyes
Listless in their mourning
Lost days of fearless youth
Love is left distraught
In uncertain, timid interactions
Belligerent words have fought
Each new sermon served
And the lack of a lesson taught.
Published 10th Sep 2019
| Edited 11th Sep 2019
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10th Sep 2019 1:09pm
As I was reading a painting came to mind. Have you ever seen an OC painting by the name “Spring of the drowned girl”? If not I’ll include a link. Your write and this painting, in my opinion of course, would fit beautifully together.
https://m.imgur.com/gallery/tjmliWY
https://m.imgur.com/gallery/tjmliWY
10th Sep 2019 9:52pm
I had never seen this painting but I have to agree. I may add it to this piece. Thank you for taking the time to read, it is greatly appreciated.
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16th Sep 2019 5:28am
Thank you for the kind words and the support, I appreciate it very much.
11th Oct 2019 1:19pm
A thought-provoking poem, for sure. The whole world could do with a miracle right now.
11th Oct 2019 6:55pm
It certainly could. I do not foresee any miracles coming though sadly.
