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En lighten ment
I view clearly now
And sense extinction
On this planet of contradiction.
Nothing obscuring
Delusional ways of living.
The whispering insanity,
Is an equation we solve.
Along the way losing teeth
Dropping violently on the surfaces
of this holographic dream.
Modern man mystery practices,
Whith a little bit of extreme,
and fast-food pit stops.
Beat up, soulless
humans reach for records
and warm milk bottles.
Our schizophrenic existence,
now cheers at the finish line.
Throwing us off in the distance
With dark ego assistance.
Chaos is leaking from your eyes
waterfalls form sweat glands.
Sensing the burning,
just detach elsewhere...
He's thought well,
yet knows nothing.
And sense extinction
On this planet of contradiction.
Nothing obscuring
Delusional ways of living.
The whispering insanity,
Is an equation we solve.
Along the way losing teeth
Dropping violently on the surfaces
of this holographic dream.
Modern man mystery practices,
Whith a little bit of extreme,
and fast-food pit stops.
Beat up, soulless
humans reach for records
and warm milk bottles.
Our schizophrenic existence,
now cheers at the finish line.
Throwing us off in the distance
With dark ego assistance.
Chaos is leaking from your eyes
waterfalls form sweat glands.
Sensing the burning,
just detach elsewhere...
He's thought well,
yet knows nothing.
Published 6th Sep 2019
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6th Sep 2019 9:29pm
I didn't understand the last part when You inserted the pronoun
and assuming it's (a) God You are referring to but without that part
for me, a stellar spill
You had me at
" Our schizophrenic existence,
now cheers at the finish line. " <<<<<----- as a certified schizophrenic I undersand
and assuming it's (a) God You are referring to but without that part
for me, a stellar spill
You had me at
" Our schizophrenic existence,
now cheers at the finish line. " <<<<<----- as a certified schizophrenic I undersand
7th Sep 2019 6:55am
It think I'm referring to humans, but I wouldn't put too much thought in it. Poetry is more a subjective thing.
Happy you enjoyed this. Thanks
Wishing you strength!
Happy you enjoyed this. Thanks
Wishing you strength!
7th Sep 2019 3:13am
"Dropping violently on the surfaces
of this holographic dream." great way to describe the emotion.
Excellent spill.
Welcome to DUP.
of this holographic dream." great way to describe the emotion.
Excellent spill.
Welcome to DUP.
7th Sep 2019 6:56am
