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[font=Verdana]Her smell wafts up
enchanted snake I am
but one, having shed
my scales
and my tongue
tastes the air
heavy with her musk
She laughs
a sudden drizzle
and her legs coil around
my neck
making me powerless
I lie prostate
my head buried
the road lies ahead
sterile
I am an ocean-
boiling and virile
the million blinks
and twinkles
celestial death
in the field of vision
and the ocean touches
our skin
smelling of
the maddening
love juices
She gets up and
looks hard at me
I am a silhoutte,
soft yet hard, burning
I bite her lips
and her nails mark a path
down they rush
in search of
t
h
e
t
r
e
a
s
u
r
e
s
fingers clutch
and clamp and
skin gets brushed
the fire burns us down
as the pregnant breeze
blows and soothes
and the wet sand rises
Need and despair
and greed and distance
bleed and mingle
and dissipate as
fluid life
trickles
and tingles
and timidly
we dance
surrounded by
tiny sand dunes
and sifting sand
that soaks up
every drop,
sound and
moment
Till
non-existence.[/font]
enchanted snake I am
but one, having shed
my scales
and my tongue
tastes the air
heavy with her musk
She laughs
a sudden drizzle
and her legs coil around
my neck
making me powerless
I lie prostate
my head buried
the road lies ahead
sterile
I am an ocean-
boiling and virile
the million blinks
and twinkles
celestial death
in the field of vision
and the ocean touches
our skin
smelling of
the maddening
love juices
She gets up and
looks hard at me
I am a silhoutte,
soft yet hard, burning
I bite her lips
and her nails mark a path
down they rush
in search of
t
h
e
t
r
e
a
s
u
r
e
s
fingers clutch
and clamp and
skin gets brushed
the fire burns us down
as the pregnant breeze
blows and soothes
and the wet sand rises
Need and despair
and greed and distance
bleed and mingle
and dissipate as
fluid life
trickles
and tingles
and timidly
we dance
surrounded by
tiny sand dunes
and sifting sand
that soaks up
every drop,
sound and
moment
Till
non-existence.[/font]
Published 18th Dec 2011
| Edited 29th Dec 2011
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18th Dec 2011 5:21pm
building sand castles in eachother beautiful it lets a jovial youthful inspiring touch to love making i love it
21st Dec 2011 5:11pm
18th Dec 2011 8:16pm
21st Dec 2011 5:12pm
18th Dec 2011 10:53pm
lips, love, life marks the coalescence of two souls giving and taking in the perpetual act of conjugation. And sad sweet sorrow in the parting.
Lightbringer...poet.
Lightbringer...poet.
21st Dec 2011 5:15pm
Anonymous
19th Dec 2011 4:20pm
Beautiful!
Love these lines:
"Need and despair
and greed and distance
bleed and mingle
and dissipate as
fluid life"
Awesome write!
tornado
Love these lines:
"Need and despair
and greed and distance
bleed and mingle
and dissipate as
fluid life"
Awesome write!
tornado
21st Dec 2011 5:17pm
