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Farewell
Those longing feelings go gently by
As I bid farewell
No longer yearning for your embrace
I find serenity
I stand alone so subtle still without a care
I walk in strength all by myself
independently
I am what I am without you
And that is fine by me
I won't look back on what we had
Tis not worth the time
It is okay for me to say
You are no longer mine
As I bid farewell
No longer yearning for your embrace
I find serenity
I stand alone so subtle still without a care
I walk in strength all by myself
independently
I am what I am without you
And that is fine by me
I won't look back on what we had
Tis not worth the time
It is okay for me to say
You are no longer mine
Published 5th Sep 2019
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5th Sep 2019 11:17am
really connected with these words, so much subtle emotional content, cleverly constructed :-))))
Excellent spill :-)))))))))))))))
Excellent spill :-)))))))))))))))
5th Sep 2019 11:18am
5th Sep 2019 1:58pm
Dear SIM,
You stand very strong in this work. You also stand with many when having to let go of someone or something. I especially appreciated the impact of what you were saying in its brevity! Great work! H🌷
You stand very strong in this work. You also stand with many when having to let go of someone or something. I especially appreciated the impact of what you were saying in its brevity! Great work! H🌷
6th Sep 2019 2:58am
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6th Sep 2019 2:59am
5th Sep 2019 5:10pm
Good write, but all I was thinking while i read it was "this what my ex would've said, if she said anything"
6th Sep 2019 3:01am
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5th Sep 2019 10:57pm
The subtle rhyme and meter are a mellifluous marriage with the depth of emotion conveyed. Eloquence of verbiage is lovely.
Hello and welcome to the DU. I hope you will enjoy your time with us.
Daniel
Hello and welcome to the DU. I hope you will enjoy your time with us.
Daniel
6th Sep 2019 3:03am
