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Coldness In Dark

Coldness in dark, that's what I'm feeling now, right now
Coldness in dark, my soul is enchanted by this odd
Coldness in dark, waiting for your love, for your unique warm words
Don't leave me here alone

Can't you feel my heart calling for you?
Am I out of control? Please just save my soul
Looking at the sky's moonlight tonight
Thousand tears and thoughts confort me

This sorrow is too real
This scars are hurting me like

Coldness in dark, that's what I'm feeling now, right now
Coldness in dark, my soul is enchanted by this odd
Coldness in dark, waiting for your love, your unique warm words

Since your presence took all of me soon
Your eyes, your pure smile
All your words protect my whole weak heart
No more pain, no more sorrow, no
Don't let me down
Can't forget this memories no more
Pictures of us lay here, in my mind
This fog of sadness interferes in our love
In all of our paths, in all of ourselves

This sorrow is real
This scars are hurting me like

Coldness in dark, that's what I'm feeling now, right now
Coldness in dark, my soul is here, enchanted by the odd
Coldness in dark, waiting for your love, for your unique warm words
Don't leave me here alone
BlackSheep
Written by BlackSheep
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Author's Note
I wrote this when I was an unexperienced 12 years old (I'm 15 now). I would like that people reading this have that in mind so they can criticize from that point of view. My reference was Lithium, by...
I wrote this when I was an unexperienced 12 years old (I'm 15 now). I would like that people reading this have that in mind so they can criticize from that point of view. My reference was Lithium, by Evanescence.
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