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Coldness In Dark
Coldness in dark, that's what I'm feeling now, right now
Coldness in dark, my soul is enchanted by this odd
Coldness in dark, waiting for your love, for your unique warm words
Don't leave me here alone
Can't you feel my heart calling for you?
Am I out of control? Please just save my soul
Looking at the sky's moonlight tonight
Thousand tears and thoughts confort me
This sorrow is too real
This scars are hurting me like
Coldness in dark, that's what I'm feeling now, right now
Coldness in dark, my soul is enchanted by this odd
Coldness in dark, waiting for your love, your unique warm words
Since your presence took all of me soon
Your eyes, your pure smile
All your words protect my whole weak heart
No more pain, no more sorrow, no
Don't let me down
Can't forget this memories no more
Pictures of us lay here, in my mind
This fog of sadness interferes in our love
In all of our paths, in all of ourselves
This sorrow is real
This scars are hurting me like
Coldness in dark, that's what I'm feeling now, right now
Coldness in dark, my soul is here, enchanted by the odd
Coldness in dark, waiting for your love, for your unique warm words
Don't leave me here alone
Coldness in dark, my soul is enchanted by this odd
Coldness in dark, waiting for your love, for your unique warm words
Don't leave me here alone
Can't you feel my heart calling for you?
Am I out of control? Please just save my soul
Looking at the sky's moonlight tonight
Thousand tears and thoughts confort me
This sorrow is too real
This scars are hurting me like
Coldness in dark, that's what I'm feeling now, right now
Coldness in dark, my soul is enchanted by this odd
Coldness in dark, waiting for your love, your unique warm words
Since your presence took all of me soon
Your eyes, your pure smile
All your words protect my whole weak heart
No more pain, no more sorrow, no
Don't let me down
Can't forget this memories no more
Pictures of us lay here, in my mind
This fog of sadness interferes in our love
In all of our paths, in all of ourselves
This sorrow is real
This scars are hurting me like
Coldness in dark, that's what I'm feeling now, right now
Coldness in dark, my soul is here, enchanted by the odd
Coldness in dark, waiting for your love, for your unique warm words
Don't leave me here alone
Published 5th Sep 2019
Author's Note
I wrote this when I was an unexperienced 12 years old (I'm 15 now). I would like that people reading this have that in mind so they can criticize from that point of view. My reference was Lithium, by Evanescence.
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5th Sep 2019 4:33am
If you're writing lyrics like this now I can't begin to imagine what's ahead of you. This a beautiful song with aching in the heart. Well done.
Bienvenida a DUP.
Bienvenida a DUP.
