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Can't you look right into my soul?
Into my thoughts, into my words
My wounds are here, yelling at me
That no one is here for warming me

I stood the strongest storms
And smiled in my darkest nightmares
Still my heart is just an empty hole...

Laughing, dead inside
Faking a sweet smile
Am I too lost to be saved?

The deepest waves, drowing me
Colours have turned into blank shadows
Where spirits lay, chasing after me
While I just beg them to set me free

And when you're alone at night
Don't you question yourself your whole life?
I feel your sorrow through your eyes...

Laughing, dead inside
Faking a sweet smile
Am I too lost to be saved?

Laughing, dead inside
Faking a sweet smile
Am I too lost to be...saved?



BlackSheep
Written by BlackSheep
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Author's Note
I got inspired by the song "Duvet" by Ba, writting the song according to it's instrumental.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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