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fear creeps up her spine
the aloneness overwhelms
paperbagging breath
Written by
jemac
Published
4th Sep 2019
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Anonymous
4th Sep 2019 1:48pm
When it gets you by the throat...this pretty much describes it perfectly. That last line is amazing, a serious punctuation mark.
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Ahavati
4th Sep 2019 4:30pm
Excellent, JeJe. Encapsulates anxiety perfectly in so few words.
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Josh
(Joshua Bond)
4th Sep 2019 7:57pm
it always gets you as a sense of constriction in the throat - great haiku.
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badmalthus
(Harry Rout)
4th Sep 2019 11:31pm
Fear is our great adversity...excellent ink J.
Cheers...Harry
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DanielChristensen
(The Fire Elemental)
5th Sep 2019 11:06pm
Your haiku are quite effective in their translation of message. You have a singular ability with them.
We just went through more than a week of a huge hurricane bearing down. Terrible anxiety. I understand.
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