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Night Love Rambling
All the days I can not get back
All the nights I can not sleep
All the tears I still cry
Could fill an ocean deep
I'm scared I wont find anyone
I'm scared I'm not enough
I'm scared to love again
This heartbreak is too tough
I wish I could erase you
I wish I could forget the pain
I wish I could move on
Past the me you have slain
But alas the world is cruel
So here I still lie
Fighting my mentality
Just wanting to die
All the nights I can not sleep
All the tears I still cry
Could fill an ocean deep
I'm scared I wont find anyone
I'm scared I'm not enough
I'm scared to love again
This heartbreak is too tough
I wish I could erase you
I wish I could forget the pain
I wish I could move on
Past the me you have slain
But alas the world is cruel
So here I still lie
Fighting my mentality
Just wanting to die
Published 3rd Sep 2019
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3rd Sep 2019 1:27pm
NICELY WRITTEN QUEEN...BUT ONE SHOULD NEVER GIVE UP ON LOVE FOR WHAT IS SOMEONES TRASH IS ANOTHER PERSONS TREASURE FOR YOU KNOW YOUR SELF VALUE AND YOUR SELF WORTH...ONE LOVE
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- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
3rd Sep 2019 6:52pm
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4th Sep 2019 00:41am
Heartache is a rough go. Love will find you again and fill in that hole in your heart. Hugs
5th Sep 2019 4:26am
2nd Jan 2020 2:33pm
Would make a simple break up ballad. Favourite lines:
I wish I could move on
Past the me you have slain
(to which I would be tempted to add to make it a four line same syllable per line verse:
If there would be someone
to pick me up again.)
I wish I could move on
Past the me you have slain
(to which I would be tempted to add to make it a four line same syllable per line verse:
If there would be someone
to pick me up again.)
