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incoming ...

air

thick and heavy

wet blanket

pressure changed

slightly at first

not many may have sensed it

but it was as if the earth slowed

just a bit,

wind

rushed in

cooling

refreshing breeze

suddenly, behind it

first flash

lit up the entire room

clap of thunder

roared

bursting the night sky

into a

water fall
Written by jemac
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Author's Note
Written six years ago .. needed some refining ... Happy September
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