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You taste...
All the pleasures this world has to offer, in all my heightened sense annexed to this vivid, illustrious consciousness, you are my favorite flow of stimuli. You produce ripples of pleasure on the surface of my skin creating tides of electricity crashing against depths of my soul...simply by putting you in my mouth.
You taste of the most intense saccharine enriched fruit hidden in the deepest parts of Eden, beautifully rediscovered.
Drinking from you feels like consuming the rays of the sun with my whole existence previously shrouded in darkness and I a newcomer to light.
You taste as if the origin of our entire universe gushed out from the very tip of your cock in streams of woven silk and is now rushing throughout my canals!
You taste of life itself.
And I demand an endless rebirth...
(I simply adore riding that "astral plane" and visiting him while he sleeps. Yet, he still wonders why he wakes up entirely exhausted... oops!)
You taste of the most intense saccharine enriched fruit hidden in the deepest parts of Eden, beautifully rediscovered.
Drinking from you feels like consuming the rays of the sun with my whole existence previously shrouded in darkness and I a newcomer to light.
You taste as if the origin of our entire universe gushed out from the very tip of your cock in streams of woven silk and is now rushing throughout my canals!
You taste of life itself.
And I demand an endless rebirth...
(I simply adore riding that "astral plane" and visiting him while he sleeps. Yet, he still wonders why he wakes up entirely exhausted... oops!)
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29th Oct 2019 5:00am
Erotic can be a difficult genre to avoid the cliche, but your verbiage is quite creative and vivid in this piece. Great work!
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26th Dec 2019 7:41am
Creative little spill... Vivid and wonderful. Thanks for sharing with us, Miss!
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2nd Jan 2020 1:38am
Very good piece. I like the comment about riding the astral plane,I was gonna be a smartass but i have to remember not everyone has my sense of humor.Anyways,killer piece.
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30th Jan 2020 6:12am
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9th Oct 2020 2:02am
I love the way you write! Your alliteration is divine. You have a gift!
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9th Oct 2020 3:33am
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6th Dec 2020 4:09pm
Good god woman!!! Now truly this is the way I’d love to be suckled lol... wow...
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8th Dec 2020 5:51pm
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10th Jan 2021 3:08am
"....like consuming the rays of the sun.." Never thought of the little swimmers as if they were sun photons!
A very erotic and naughty piece. It does convey your passion and joy it brings you. About waking out exhausted, but with a smile I'm sure.
Enjoyable read, and thanks for sharing your passion.
A very erotic and naughty piece. It does convey your passion and joy it brings you. About waking out exhausted, but with a smile I'm sure.
Enjoyable read, and thanks for sharing your passion.
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8th Mar 2021 8:04am
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5th Jun 2021 00:04am
This is like a God & Goddess making love
Quite beautiful this appreciation of the King from his Queen
Absolutely heavenly
Quite beautiful this appreciation of the King from his Queen
Absolutely heavenly
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23rd Apr 2024 9:09pm
Bdjfijfjdixjnsbdjdudjd . . . . . . . You make me thumb tied lol great work bravo :p
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23rd Apr 2024 11:36pm
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4th May 2024 11:02pm
You have an uncommon freshness and intellectualism to your erotica, combined with stark and crisp imagery. Your work definitely stands out. I read Yearning before this one, but there's nowhere to comment. Otherwise, I'm sure you'd have a pageful. That piece was particularly impressive - my fave so far. This is really good too, as are all your pieces.
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