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in the rain

 


 
 
even
 
 
 
 
when
 
 
 
  
the
 
 
 
 
rain
 
 
 
pours
 
 
 
down
 
 
on
 
 
you
 
I
 
still
 
see
your
tears
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
dejure
Written by dejure (vick)
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Re. in the rain
(Noire)
- Edited 3rd Sep 2019 5:49am
3rd Sep 2019 5:47am
oh god.. you gave me chills and then i felt something break..



speechless
HowlingWhelms
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Re: Re. in the rain
(vick)
3rd Sep 2019 7:52am
Awww thank you for your kind words :)
dejure
Re. in the rain
4th Sep 2019 1:37pm
Lovely... and I also like the layout of this piece.... Well done.
:)
MysticalRose
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Re: Re. in the rain
(vick)
22nd Sep 2019 10:30am
thank you...   glad you liked it :)
dejure

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