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when i became the flame
Published 26th Aug 2019
| Edited 17th Sep 2019
Author's Note
Non-entry in the Rupi Kaur comp (not new), reminiscent of this style of her poetry:
https://me.me/i/i-know-i-should-crumble-for-better-reasons-but-have-9705174308f347aba2370a7fc650c328
https://me.me/i/i-know-i-should-crumble-for-better-reasons-but-have-9705174308f347aba2370a7fc650c328
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26th Aug 2019 8:19pm
26th Aug 2019 9:27pm
Thank you- it's from the perspective of a new love, who thankfully graduated from her controlling partner.
27th Aug 2019 1:38am
27th Aug 2019 5:11am
17th Sep 2019 6:41pm
17th Sep 2019 6:44pm
Thanks! Actually, a new lover telling me about why she left her controlling husband, who couldn't handle seeing her do sexy things like dancing when there were other men around.
17th Sep 2019 6:52pm
17th Sep 2019 6:58pm
17th Sep 2019 7:10pm
I love when that happens, I can’t wait to read it. I’m glad I could help in my oblique way.☺️
