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ordinary
III
Room
above street.
Dimmed
evening shadings.
Hazy stars,
humid pressure.
Insect sounds,
restless antiphony.
Single figure
peers down.
Window word.
Desperate
silhouette
aching .
Published 24th Aug 2019
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24th Aug 2019 2:41pm
When one reads this, one can instantly become absorbed in the emotion of longing. It can also be read two ways: from the window or from the street. You're really good at portraying emotion, Kitty.
24th Aug 2019 7:43pm
That is the greatest compliment i have ever received. I am humbled.
100 hugs/ luv' s to you,
buddhakitty.
100 hugs/ luv' s to you,
buddhakitty.
24th Aug 2019 6:18pm
Truly evocative B-Kitty...I can almost feel it starting to rain...reminds me of seeing in windows while out walking late at night...each window telling a story...all of its own.
Wonderful piece...this is indeed...I think I will take it home. hugs, Ely
Wonderful piece...this is indeed...I think I will take it home. hugs, Ely
24th Aug 2019 7:45pm
Wow! Thank you Ely. All hugs welcomed by this kitty.
hugs back at you.
buddhakitty.
hugs back at you.
buddhakitty.
24th Aug 2019 7:52pm
Dear BK,
Reminds me of all the lonesomeness I’d feel, peering out at the world and wishing...
Really great write! H🌷
Reminds me of all the lonesomeness I’d feel, peering out at the world and wishing...
Really great write! H🌷
24th Aug 2019 11:30pm
Thank you H. I deeply appreciate that you found the poem relatable.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
