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Soul Spill
From sweltering pink heat, flushed in scarlet friction, and tucked within trembling limbs of alabaster, he rose. Lips adorned with the opaque glimmer and gleam of our recently welded form, mightily inched their way upwards.
His lips met mine, tangling in reverberating sighs while strands of our white satin core were placed upon my tongue.
The mingled spill of his soul and my own, then danced on the swirls and in betweens of two lovestruck tongues.
Published 23rd Aug 2019
| Edited 6th Jul 2020
Author's Note
Copyright © 2019 PandoraUnleashed. All rights reserved.
Here I am again showing up after another case of being MIA. But without empty promises to once again become active this time. Sadly, the Deep has had an awkward feel to me, but I've definitely missed you guys. With a quick glance, I was excited to see new faces too! ❤
Here I am again showing up after another case of being MIA. But without empty promises to once again become active this time. Sadly, the Deep has had an awkward feel to me, but I've definitely missed you guys. With a quick glance, I was excited to see new faces too! ❤
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Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
23rd Aug 2019 12:14pm
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24th Aug 2019 8:03pm
Thanks HF...I greatly appreciate the awesome feedback & I'm glad the 1st bit was an eye grabber for you!
Yes, the Deep will always be family no matter what, it's been kinda weird having people missing, plus my mind has been distracted. It's time to get my ass back here & heal though!;)
Yes, the Deep will always be family no matter what, it's been kinda weird having people missing, plus my mind has been distracted. It's time to get my ass back here & heal though!;)
23rd Aug 2019 12:20pm
Always experience a flash of excitement when you return. I came close to leaving, but here I still am. The art of a kiss has never been so sensuously handled with such lovely words.
24th Aug 2019 8:06pm
Yay! You're here! Omg T...I'm so glad as I logged in one day to see you gone. With all the changes in my life, I just logged back out when I saw that. We've always had that fandom & support going! ;)
25th Aug 2019 1:52pm
Almost...had a change of heart this past week. Was going to let them all go...as I do not keep copies. But there are certain things that I can only express here it seems. You will have to fill me in.
25th Aug 2019 3:47pm
Absolutely. Plus the Deep soothes us. I know I've felt some awkwardness ...but it's HOME. I think I kinda fill you in on my spill responding to your other comment, plus the new senyru. Fucking face palm! I'll catch up with you though, you're a favorite ya know;)
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24th Aug 2019 8:12pm
You just said you tip your hat, but how can you be lost too? 🤔
If it's the content, they're kissing with their cum in their mouths.😂🤣
If it's the content, they're kissing with their cum in their mouths.😂🤣
24th Aug 2019 8:32pm
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Anonymous
23rd Aug 2019 2:10pm
I don't know why this one misted me up this morning...
24th Aug 2019 8:09pm
Hehee...nothing wrong with getting a little misty, girl. Thanks for the feedback
23rd Aug 2019 2:29pm
Wow
Reading this
Watching Netflix
Drinking some orange juice
Girl I want some of that soul spill
Reading this
Watching Netflix
Drinking some orange juice
Girl I want some of that soul spill
24th Aug 2019 8:10pm
Hey, Trome! You're back too..it's good to see people returning...thanks so much!
23rd Aug 2019 3:26pm
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Anonymous
23rd Aug 2019 3:41pm
drip drop the juicy hits the right spot ...connection made and lust takes center... as erotism becomes red rage and swell to the explosive stage...still the pleasure knows no equal...we live and die for love in forms that make movie sequels....over and over...LOVE YOUR INK....Yeah, like that!!!
24th Aug 2019 8:14pm
There's THE MAN writing those sexy adult movie lines! I'm happy it got ya like that....
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 6:45am
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24th Aug 2019 8:15pm
Anonymous
- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
23rd Aug 2019 5:30pm
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24th Aug 2019 8:16pm
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Anonymous
23rd Aug 2019 9:30pm
A delicious welcome back !!!
24th Aug 2019 8:18pm
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25th Aug 2019 10:13pm
Indeed, it’s very good — some excellent writing that latches onto a spirit and hangs on tightly from the first mouths-filled kiss.
25th Aug 2019 10:15pm
Indeed, it’s very good — some excellent writing that latches onto a spirit and hangs on tightly from the scarlet passion to the mouths-filled kiss.
26th Aug 2019 5:41pm
24th Aug 2019 7:21pm
You command the ink you spill...and it drips with passion from your quill!! Sensual would be an understatement.
24th Aug 2019 8:21pm
Yay! You're here & I'm so glad! You're getting ready to read some other stuff that may seem familiar, til I think some more, at least;)
24th Aug 2019 7:54pm
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25th Aug 2019 3:40am
This feels like an erotic dream come true. You spin your words with the finesse of a true poet on fire with sensuality.
John
John
25th Aug 2019 11:45am
Once again, I'm humbled by your gracious compliment and respect. These words mean a lot to me! Thank you for them & another add..🙏
1st Sep 2019 5:12pm
Sensuous - "our recently welded form" gives a picture of a couple regrouping after the climax.
That pic suggests a dripping vulva.
That pic suggests a dripping vulva.
3rd Sep 2019 3:19am
Thanks so much...That's why I picked that picture & they were definitely regrouping with sweet ecstasy on their lips.😏
3rd Sep 2019 5:09am
goodlawd this is sexy af and my air conditioner suddenly is not
working ..*sipping air*
working ..*sipping air*
3rd Sep 2019 7:58pm
Heehee...I hope you're still breathing!
.....Thanks for the awesome comment love
.....Thanks for the awesome comment love
5th Sep 2019 5:50pm
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