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[ SK ] Ghosts?
There's no such thing
Hey, it's just my opinion
Though having read any books
of mine based on numerous
"supposed" haunted locations
along good ole Route 66
you'd already know
that's how I roll
And by ghosts, I mean lost souls
dearly departed from their bodies
still wandering this mortal coil
But, just hear me out for a moment;
what if there are places in this world
that pull no punches, telling it like it is
Call'em psychic mirrors or vortexes
or whatever new age bullshit
you scrape off your shoe's tread---
these locations mind-fuck you
with your own personal baggage
I know; absurd, right?
I'd be laughing my ass off as well
if not for the night I spent in that
evil fucking room
on the Dolphin Hotel's 14th floor
Listen ...
the oil paintings on the walls?
Came alive within their frames---
morphed into stranger things
The walls themselves flexed
as if that crusty building was alive
and I was in its expanding lungs
Get this --- the floor turned quicksand
where I was standin; I could feel
myself sinking into something
other than the room below---
can't say what is was for sure
I want to describe it as
liquid oblivion
Anyway, doesn't matter if it was real
or not, what actually happened to me;
or, if I hallucinated it all ...
The experience was mine
because none of us can see
beyond our own convictions
So, I can appreciate why guests
who survived their stay in 1408
insist it is at maximum capacity
with human spirits
Point is ...
when you don't believe in anything?
Then there's nothing concrete
for hoisting yourself out
of the impending madness
swallowing you up
And let me tell you---
that's some really scary shit
iteration prior to Ahavati's comprehensive honest critique
There's no such thing
Hey, it's just my opinion;
though having read any books
of mine based on numerous
"supposed" haunted locations
along good ole Route 66
you would already know
that's how I roll
And by ghosts, I mean lost souls
dearly departed from their bodies
not this mortal coil
But, just hear me out for a moment;
what if there are places in this world
that pull no punches, telling it like it
is - call'em psychic mirrors or vortexes
or whatever new age bullshit term
you can scrape off your shoe's tread -
these locations mind fuck you
with your own personal baggage
I know; absurd, right?
I'd be laughing my ass off as well
if not for the night I spent in that
evil fucking room
on the Dolphin Hotel's 14th floor
Listen ...
the oil paintings on the walls?
Came alive within their frames -
morphed into different images
The walls themselves flexed
as if that crusty building was alive
and I was in its expanding lungs
Get this - the floor turned quicksand
where I was standing - I could feel
myself sinking into something
other than the room below;
can't say what is was for sure
I want to describe it as
liquid oblivion
Anyway, doesn't matter if it was real
or not; actually happening to me;
if I hallucinated it all ...
The experience was mine to own
because none of us can see
beyond our own convictions
So I can appreciate why guests who
survived their stay in 1408 insist
it is packed to maximum capacity
with human spirits
Point is ...
when you don't believe in anything?
Then there's nothing concrete to grab
and use for hoisting yourself out of the
impending madness swallowing you up
And let me tell you -
that's some really scary shit
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