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No tides

Why cant oceans just flow, like a gentle river stream    
Is it just me, thinking out loud, during a long and vivid dream  
Instead of crashing into shore, then going back for some more †  
Just trickle towards the edge, without a noisy, almighty roar †  
Ships and boats, would never ever be, tipped and sunk †  
Girls on the shore, would never ever see, a ripped surfy hunk †  
No whitecaps to see, no tides to ruin sand castles on shore †  
Precious marine life just swimming and crawling about †  
Not getting tossed all about, theyíd be happy, thatís for sure †  
But for this to work, its way to challenging † †
For we still rely on our orbiting moon, to be happening † †
Thatís what my dream didnít quite bother, to fully figure out.
Fetchitnow
Written by Fetchitnow
Published | Edited 20th Oct 2019
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© Fetchitnow
17 October 2019.
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