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No tides

Why cant oceans just flow, like a gentle river stream  
Is it just me, thinking out loud,  during a long and vivid dream  
Instead of crashing into shore, then going back for some more  
Just trickle towards the edge, without a noisy, almighty roar  
Ships and boats, would never ever be, tipped and sunk  
Girls on the shore, would never ever see, a ripped surfy hunk  
No whitecaps to see, no tides to ruin sand castles on shore  
Precious marine life just swimming and crawling about  
Not getting tossed all about, theyíd be happy, thatís for sure  
But for this to work, its way to challenging
For we still rely on our orbiting moon, to be happening
Thatís what my dream didnít quite bother, to fully figure out.
Fetchitnow
Written by Fetchitnow
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