Epic called 'October'
A.October or OctoberA., was founded in November by DU Poetry. I am (we are) so happy to read his thoughts which he generously posts on this site.
My hand quivers as I start this write: †
To express to you †
My thoughts for you †
In ink, with this pen
How shall I put this? †
How shall I begin? †
To form the perfect words,
As sincere as can be
Without much inhibitions
Pure from my heart, from me
I dare to write
My thoughts once unwritten
Am I unjust to have this view
And post for all to see?
Maybe, yes, maybe so †
Just sit back, relax and read.
So I write:
Half remembering what an Epic meant. †
Thinking, do Epics have rhyming schemes? †
Or must a story just be told? †
Wondering, how the hell am I going to write this said Epic, about someone I barely know.
Here we go:
I have only known OctoberA. for one month and a few days
But he is more than a jolly good decent lad. †
OctoberA. has exponential potential and of course a great talent.
Hoping you like the story and the flow. †
There isn't much I really know
---unfortunately; yet. †
I know this much though:
The man must can kiss [I mean..FUCK].
"Dripping Lips" was pretty epic. †
In itself, what an accomplishment it was! †
Especially, since 'Dripping Lips" was A.October's first dab at an Erotic. †
My imagination was keen †
And I beamed †
At the details gleaned
So, ehm, as I said.. †
This man must can fuck [I mean KISS].
A.October has the power to rape †
[Yes, I bloody said rape] †
Our minds and make us question our intellect. †
I speak with truth †
[At least, MY truth] †
Even though some may think otherwise. †
Good for them, I suppose. †
Yet I told Alip, †
[Alistair.. yes, I'm calling you out] †
That some crap
[SHIT! yes, I bloody said S H I T!] †
On DUP, gets liked and entered faster than a mind-fuck has you shitting bricks
[crap!!] Utter crap!!
OctoberA. is like a pure-bred.
Pure-breds have stable stature, creed †
And of course refined pedigrees. †
More like him is what DU needs.
Am I still writing?
[Feels more like I'm rambling] †
So on so? †
Who ruddy cares, what a Low-Life like me cares... about? †
Blah, blah, blah. †
Har, har, har. †
Shut the fuck up, you Pansy! †
Hell-fucking, No! †
This write is for October †
And October, I do fancy.
Yes, by now, I think we've gotten that much. But seriously Jordanne, you do not have to curse.
Dearest Reader: †
Yes, of course you are right. Yet passion felt when felt, whether it be in niceties or vulgarity, does not much matter. Passion is passion, expressed on the Train of Thought; the mind reasons.
Back to October! †
Yes, October!! †
Oh damn, this man can write DEEP. †
"Lyrical Thunder" was such a wonder
That kicked my mind and tipped my seat †
-- back & steep.
When did I fall
So close †
After the rain †
Words of Goodbye †
Titles on Paper
No Easter Bunny,Nightmare †
Tired, What to do †
No Longer an Anniversary, Kumiko
Last Wish.. Last Light.. Last Happiness.. Tranquility??? †
Nothing left to me
Who Am I †
Sunrise & Sundown
Landscapes of Escaping Sadness
Captured Heart †
When you look at me
I've read your writes †
Most I like
And a few I do love
Your words take me on journey †
Far away from [Kingston] Surrey †
Where I feel like I am next to you, with you †
Rather than miles apart
And two bodies of water away
Please never put down your pen †
Keep writing, typing and posting †
For I want to read your words on deeds.. †
You, before, have not yet even spoken
So this is it:
I ventured to write an Epic
[Something like an Epic]
If I may..
Not just to write of you
But to write a piece
wonderful and unique
That expressed my thoughts to you. †
For you, my Dear
Dearest Mr. October
Keep me sober from being somber; †
From my daunting daily woes †
And tainted Tormented soul †
So sweet, you have me won over
An [attempted] Epic written †
For I am quite smitten with Mr. October
This is far from The Iliad
I am no Homer.
Your words are like licking honey
†† † † ---mmmm, you sweet talk so well
I am a die-hard Romantic so of course I fell...
You intrigue me, come and meet me
†† † †---this silly Capricorn! †
We will smoke Jamaican spliffs, come and dance [SOCA] with me
†† † †---enlighten my psyche evermore!