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A day of cooler clime it takes me there
The wind on Cornish cliffs
says there’s a God
The faces bleached & bare
don’t spare the rod
Before the clan of men
these edges trod
Where flourishes sea bass,
pilchard and cod
The moss along the beach
are gathered first
Within the forces, rains
that try one’s thirst
The seagulls tack and cry
amid the ports
With ev’ry kind
humanity and sorts
While coastal fronts
between to drive a wedge
The trolls that tend the bogs,
the faery hedge
The legends, myths & tales
in forest swamp
Across the thick and green
the Shetlands romp
Their nicker sounds to toss
their shaggy manes
While over in the marsh,
two common cranes
Into more subtle seek
a subject wades
Into a Cornish reach
such depth evades
May time & weather’s vane
to those who sail
Return ye Cornwall once
upon a gale
Image: The National Trust
Written by
Heaven_sent_Kathy
Published 17th Aug 2019
Author's Note
My mind meandered today till I found myself heading there...
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Re: Re. A day of cooler clime it takes me there
Thank you Skyblue, I'm grateful for your appreciation, enjoying this write. And warm welcome as you begin your journey here at the Deepend as some call it.
blessed and blessings,
Kathy
blessed and blessings,
Kathy
Re. A day of cooler clime it takes me there
Anonymous
18th Aug 2019 00:25am
"The wind on Cornish cliffs
says there’s a God"
That right there had me sold.
says there’s a God"
That right there had me sold.
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Re: Re. A day of cooler clime it takes me there
18th Aug 2019 00:31am
Thank you JohnnyBlaze, yes...
if the rest wasn't so determined, that is where I would have left it,
blessed and blessings
Kathy
if the rest wasn't so determined, that is where I would have left it,
blessed and blessings
Kathy
Re: Re. A day of cooler clime it takes me there
18th Aug 2019 3:06am
I have to second JohnnyBlaze's comment. But I'm oh so glad you continued on... lovely images, you took me there with you.
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20th Aug 2019 6:06am
Thank you, brokentitanium, for such loving words, and for following the urge to join me on my tramp.
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Re. A day of cooler clime it takes me there
18th Aug 2019 2:03pm
Another Cornish-inspired poem (just read ImperfectedStone's).
Is that Godrevy Lighthouse in the background? If so I know that headland with the horses - I used to live just down the road in Phillack (opposite The Bucket-of-Blood pub), near Gwythian Sands - and before that in Carbis Bay with a view to Godrevy every day (when it wasn't foggy).
Great poem; the evocative images make me wonder why I left after 10 years there.
Is that Godrevy Lighthouse in the background? If so I know that headland with the horses - I used to live just down the road in Phillack (opposite The Bucket-of-Blood pub), near Gwythian Sands - and before that in Carbis Bay with a view to Godrevy every day (when it wasn't foggy).
Great poem; the evocative images make me wonder why I left after 10 years there.
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20th Aug 2019 7:49am
Hello to you Josh - it's lovely to see you. I saw hers once I returned. I love how poets from around the world have impressions of the same place at almost the same time ( I started my write two days before publishing ), and look at the different ways we describe the feelings!
And indeed yes that is Godrevy Lighthouse. And all the rest you've mentioned rang a bell with me, except The Bucket of Blood pub. Oh wouldn't that be amazing to share a pint there over talks of your times when you lived in the area.
You wonder after10 years there? I would too > "Why indeed?"
And indeed yes that is Godrevy Lighthouse. And all the rest you've mentioned rang a bell with me, except The Bucket of Blood pub. Oh wouldn't that be amazing to share a pint there over talks of your times when you lived in the area.
You wonder after10 years there? I would too > "Why indeed?"
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24th Aug 2019 4:53pm
Thank you for that Kathy. The current name was the original name going way back, then in the Victorian era it was deemed a bit too 'rough' for delicate ears so it was changed (can't remember what to) but I think in the 1970s the original name was deemed to be good for tourism so it was re-introduced. Something like that anyway. The pub also has one of the lowest ceilings of any pub in the country - I could nowhere near stand up straight inside.
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Re. A day of cooler clime it takes me there
19th Aug 2019 11:14pm
It's a lovely meandering, Kathy. I so enjoyed the trip back to my childhood. Cornish poems seem to be about the place lately, I am happy.
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20th Aug 2019 7:52am
I'm so glad you enjoyed the jaunt dear One. And yes I wish I could have stayed longer last time I was here to revel in more. I'm especially happy you were happy.
ah to the blessing of it all,
Kathy
ah to the blessing of it all,
Kathy
Re. A day of cooler clime it takes me there
26th Sep 2019 6:36pm
Stunning MizKathy, you took me there...to experience a delicious walk...I daresay almost as good as being there...Thank you MizK for the stroll through the great spill of ink... Ely
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27th Sep 2019 10:05am
Greetings to you MissEly ( if I may ),
And such a lovely reveal of your thoughts as to this write. I am quite touched by your appreciation and recommendation - thank you deeply.
blessed and blessings
Kathy
And such a lovely reveal of your thoughts as to this write. I am quite touched by your appreciation and recommendation - thank you deeply.
blessed and blessings
Kathy
Re. A day of cooler clime it takes me there
11th Oct 2019 10:17pm
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12th Oct 2019 1:36pm
Thank you Poet, for visiting my work and letting me know of your enjoyment.
blessed and blessings
Kathy
blessed and blessings
Kathy