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Daytripping
Lately
My mind has been all cloudy
But sheltered from your storms
So lady
Relax and come on down now
Cuz what you feel can spread around
Daily
My thoughts, they turn and fall on you
But are they true?
So maybe
It値l come and go away like rain
Daytrippin, in the shade
I知 not lazy
My hours seem to drift away
But whose got the time, anyway?
So don稚 save me
The path I walks my very own
And if I知 forced, I値l walk alone.
My mind has been all cloudy
But sheltered from your storms
So lady
Relax and come on down now
Cuz what you feel can spread around
Daily
My thoughts, they turn and fall on you
But are they true?
So maybe
It値l come and go away like rain
Daytrippin, in the shade
I知 not lazy
My hours seem to drift away
But whose got the time, anyway?
So don稚 save me
The path I walks my very own
And if I知 forced, I値l walk alone.
Published 11th Aug 2019
Author's Note
This is a song from my band, it痴 called chemical reaction, you can us on Facebook.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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13th Aug 2019 1:23am
Very good songlyrics. Slow funk music.
*And if I知 forced, I値l walk alone...* I really like this verse.
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*And if I知 forced, I値l walk alone...* I really like this verse.
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17th Aug 2019 1:10am
Nicely constructed! The original vibe is replaced by a feeling of isolation in the last stanza.
